Reviews for Time of Departure (The Amended Version)
Guest chapter 3 . 3/29
What more can I say? Don't even know where to begin. Keep up the great work because wow! A mindfuck I am experiencing.
JohnJuanRamboJr35 chapter 3 . 3/29
Great I fell in love with this drama again and the saddest thing is I have to wait for the next update but take your time and make your magic
Caboose.RvB343 chapter 3 . 3/29
Yesssssss I wasn’t expecting but I need moreeeee
avjuan37 chapter 3 . 3/29
please make more chapters
Almighty Spartan chapter 2 . 3/29
This types of stories are really not my thing, i despise ntr.
I tried giving it a shot but it is apparent that your work will continue to include it as a daily reminder, it would not be so bad if it was mentioned and than droped for the plot to develop further past that point, but by chapter 2 its clear you want to keep bringing it up further for further shock value( i guess).

Furthermore maybe its because of my inexpiriance in the world but why would you be obcessed with one person and cheat on them every day, might be because you are making Weiss to be some time of controling person that gets off on a persons misery but i dont know it just does not feel like good caracterization. Adding to this the story is classefied as white knight maybe arkos, does this mean that after all the drama is said and done you are considering white knight as the final pairing? I mean i just dont see how that would make for a good development, jaune gets cheated on regurlarly leaves and then gets back on with the wife that fucks another man in front of him?

I guess it just me ranting at this point, if you are considering readong this story you might like it if you like ntr, otherwise stay away from it.

PS:Im going to skim chapter 3 to see if anything is altered if so i will say so there in a review.
avjuan37 chapter 2 . 11/8/2019
please make more chapters
JohnJuanRamboJr35 chapter 1 . 11/6/2019
There is no words to describe this story but you have made my morning
Helios61 chapter 2 . 11/5/2019
make jaune go to Antarctica for an omake, that would be awkward if Weiss still follows him there...

on second though send him to Egypt, Ice queen can't survive there

great story though I can feel the pain from the story over here keep up the work
Caboose.RvB343 chapter 2 . 10/13/2019
My god this is a very good story so far please keep it going it’s very interesting
ibarelyknowher chapter 2 . 10/13/2019
Very riveting story so far, I'm enjoying it a lot. I think a rivalry between Pyrrha and Weiss will be really interesting and I look forward to the chapter.
Arrogant Comprehender chapter 1 . 10/12/2019
Not only crazy but also cheating bitch? Oh boy...
OmniUnorthodox chapter 1 . 9/24/2019
I remember this story. Would always go through the shorts to hopefully see more of this one, so I'm glad someone took it up and made a story out of it.
Bomberguy789 chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
On the one hand, crazy person is crazy.
On the other hand, crazy person has potentially sabotaged their own efforts at being crazy, and assuming that this crazy lady isn't an idiot due to being raised by a no nonsense business man of epic proportions, crazy lardy is being crazy purely for the sake of being crazy, rather than leaving it at "hey, that's a nice phone you've got there, the guy who gave it to you, where did he go?"
Aburg76 chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
nice...I think...Weiss here is quite terrifying
Spartan0X BK201 chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
Jaune and yandre Weiss. Me likely. can't wait for more.
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