This looks like it would be a interesting story but the one thing I have to say is that for future references the unsc was able to land all there ships on a planet and take off again with out any problems

Hope you continue this it looks good so far. Quick question is master chief and cortana going to be around or is it going to be sheperd and some other ai cough edi cough going to ge the main character's

love it

interesting story, timeline was good, so keep going

So this is just the Systems Alliance with a different name, I mean you just took away almost everything about Halo, not to mention the atrocious decision to make the reapers a threath to the FORERRUNERS, you know those guys that casually build entire planets and had the capacity to destroy all life in the galaxy. Like another reviewer said this shows a clear bias.

Nice story

Unless UNSC found Forerunner Shipyard, they would be at a big disadvantages due to their slower ships speed

By the way, is masterchief or any other of that groups exist in this AU ? Just wondering

Thank you for sharing this story

Excellent story
Very good elaboration of the Timeline

So, no Halo nor Covenant in this AU. But in that case, would the UNSC be technologically weaker in terms of ships, shields, ... etc. ? Also, UNSC is depending on Mass Effect Relays might be another weakness comparing to UNSC slipping drive advantages.

Overall it is very interesting
Wondering about Covenant CCS class battlecruiser in reference to this chapter ships Specification & whether it be added later in the description, if applicable

Thank you
Best regards

Good start. I’m really eager to see how this goes x3

You’ve caught my attention. Can’t wait to see what you do with this set up.

Good start! I would just say look at the population for the UNSC as you have the Sol system having a pop of 660 Billion

I'm going to love this story, please continue and update soon please.

Seems interesting but why the adding on of a SW race?
Also does this mean the convie's do not exist or do not appear till the UNSC and the CC are allied or will they attack the CC instead of the UNSC due to them using tech similar to the ones who attacked their "gods"?

Timelines are the absolute bane of these stories. Especially timelines that rattle off completely irrelevant points of time like the death of Alexander the Great. It violates the rule of show, don't tell and is really nothing more than word count padding.

Problems of this kind of fics:

1) Nerfing the Forerunners just for the sake of balance, it is somewhat silly. The Reapers are in no way a threat for a galactic civilization that use "collapsing microuniverses" as a their main energy source... Nope, never gonna a happend, worst you dont give a plausible reason for that Then you also erased the Flood of the story. Nevermind the Reapers cant beat the Flood either.
2) Erase the Covenant and specially the Human-Covenant war it is basically rewrote the whole UNSC. The War it is the defining moment for the humanity in the Halo saga... your UNSC it is not the UNSC of the games. Yes its tech progression will be diferent, but their attitude and psychology will be torally alien.
3) Try to cramm everything to fit the ME events and ignore the events of Halo its showing bias.

I agree with rest that the forerunners losing to the reapers is impossible, best thing you can do is say that After the forerunners used the halo rings to stop the flood the Reapers came back to start the cycle ever since there lose to them.