Mara's pale and blonde...Like almost gold, yellow blonde.

It's amazing. You took several of my favorite animes and blended them smoothly into a pleasant, well written, coherent whole.

I won't wait till I finish it to submit my first review.

It's a good story, well worth reading.

Mike

Wow. Never thought i'd find a story like this! Well written and I'm looking forward to finishing it when I get home from work. I always loved Onegai Teacher and I'm a huge fan of Ah My Goddess. Great work keeping things realistic!

This is a damn fine piece of work. A real page turner, so to say. I'm now interested in seeing the please teacher series just from this story. Great job.

An excellent story, well written and devoid of the amateurish mistakes I have come to expect from most fanfics. Its nice to see Peorth be treated as something other than a comicly overdone romantic. She is, afterall, a woman and, despite her confidence and individualistic spirit, she deserves love too.

I usually hate crossover fics, but I took a chance on this one since I love both shows.

I have to say that this was one of the best pieces of fanfic I've ever read. The characterization was spot on, the plot was interesting, the grammar and composition were good, I loved it!

I agree that Onegai Twins gave Matagu the shaft, so I'm glad to see you writing a much better ending for him.

Fabulous work!

Well written and in character! An interesting crossover fic. What a change to see a portrayal of Matagu as shy and uncertain instead of just a sis-con pervert. What a matchup, Matagu and Peorth. Makes me feel like Tamiya, since Peorth is my favorite goddess.

Great story, with a well-written finish! Enjoyed it very much. Great job! And again... great job in writing this! :P

A good story, well written, with a nice finish.

I enjoyed it greatly. Thanks for posting.

Mike

I love the way you have captured the spirit of both series. While reading this section I felt as if I were actually *there* - that these were real people interacting and I was a silent observer. Well done.

Mike

(author of the Keiichi's Magic Trick trilogy)

Your fanfic "Onegai, MegamiSama!" has been nominated for author of the month. please email Shinji the good sharer if you accept.

oh,... my,... god,...

I just stumbled upon this story while looking for something to pass the time at work. I must say, this kept me heavily entertained and on the edge of my seat through the entire boring night.

Great job, and you should do a follow up to the story _

I JUST LOVE YOU!

This story is already stored as one of my favorite ones, and along with LH: Inheritance, has a special place in my heart!

I love both shows (OneTei and AMS) and this merging was completely stunning! You cannot stop this...Please!

Matagu was a dear character to me,and I do agree that what they did to him (and to Mizuho by the way...) on OTwins was not right. They transformed him into a freak pervert, and Mizuho into a complete ditz (wich is not the way her character is in OneTei. She may be naive, but not a ditz...)

And Peorth...Ahh, Peorth...I just loved your pairing here...You not just make justice to Matagu, but also gave him a soo sweet destiny...and as for his dreams, well, if you dream to encounter an Alien, to meet a Goddess instead is soo much more...much more than any alien!

Hope they end up really together, like Kei and Bell...Peorth is ok, and I would like to see Matagu and she marrying...GREAT GREAT GREAT...

So PLEASE PLEASE ONEGAI ONEGAI do not stop...Carry on...There is so much more stories possible here...Just imagine Urd and Hatzuho teaming together? Please, go for MORE!

Will be waiting more...You are on ALL my lists here...

Gambatte!

VoidHawk Out

PS - If you ever need a Beta, or want to just talk, drop me a mail...Would like to exchange ideas with you...

You know this story is just too good to end. You really should come back to it and continue where you left off. There are so few of us that seem to be writing anything for the Onegai Teacher world its a shame to have a really great one be left alone, and there is still so much that could be done with it yet.

I hope you do continue this, or maybe even start a new tale from after this on ends...

BlueDragon

Great story. You managed to tie togeather too of my favorit stories it a great way. Keep up the good work!