Reviews for Heartbreaker
MasterDarkElf chapter 4 . 6/9/2014
I actually thought it was interesting didn't like the little naughtiness between lance and kitty that moment but other than that this was an interesting story I didn't LOVE the ending but it was ok nice job.
RobinaRain chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
That was cruel. Really cruel. I get that it makes sense to make it an angish ending, but still...
Gabby Gatsby chapter 4 . 1/22/2011
Irony I was listening to Break Even by Scriptwhen reading this. So sad couldn't help but cry.
Tech-Man chapter 4 . 11/12/2009
Well, I have to say that the ending caught me a little off guard. Being the hapless romantic that I am, I wanted those two together. On the other hand I do have to commend you for sticking with your original ending. You did a very good job with this story.
Kat chapter 4 . 11/2/2009
No! *bursts into tears*

It's an excellent story but as many have said already, it's so very sad. Great job on this! As much as I would have liked to see a happy ending, I have to say this was well written and tugs at the heart strings.

I'll just make up a happy ending in my head I suppose -
dyzanimefangrl chapter 4 . 8/11/2009
aw this wuz so sad. i really wished that they had ended up together.
tab chapter 4 . 8/4/2009
i really hated the ending at first... but then i thought, there arnt many kurttys out there that have an un-happy ending, so two thumbs up! you're a fantastic writer.
MLEgo chapter 4 . 7/6/2009
Yeah, I was a little disappointed with the ending, but whatever, it was a well-written story and it showed different sides to Kurt and Kitty. It was different and unique, so that's awesome! Good job :)
Kanaydian Dragon chapter 4 . 5/8/2009
The ending was a bit of a surprise, especially since Amanda hadn't been a part of the story right up until the ending, but I guess it tells the reader a lesson - don't squander your chances because you may not get another one.
Southern shadow chapter 4 . 7/10/2006
*Cries* Thyat was so good!. Altho i don blame kurt for doing thyat, he so needs tihme to heal. But i hope ya eventually write a sequeal to this, lihke how he felt, or something along thos lines, n i don lihke lance. Kurtty all the way Babe. 0_0
Shadow-Kitty-Cat chapter 4 . 12/21/2003
Ahh! *cries pasionately* so sad, can't take it, must have happy endings...:'( (how can it b so good at the same time as so sad?)
Incase u didnt get that, it meant i luved it but hated it...brilliant story but so sad!
Erin chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
This is good. Maybe you could have someone edit it to fix some of the errors at the beginning. Overall this was really good. I like the last part "I truly didn't deserve his love." That's great stuff.
Yurikitsune chapter 3 . 9/9/2003
this is so exciting, ur going on my faves!
Somraya Darkfire chapter 4 . 8/26/2003
i cried! not right! really well written, but i think the fuzzy elf...*sob*...would forgive her! *hiccup* anyway, *inhales, hiccups* i liked it...but it's so sad!
Mae Liz chapter 4 . 7/9/2003
That was a really sad ending, but it was a good story. It didn't supprise me that he said it was too soon to forgive her. It wouldn't have even shocked me if he had said that he would never forgive her. That is just my opinion though. Anyway if was a good story.
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