You write the best stories! Wow I cried so much in this one, I really love them. I was waiting for the kiss. Friends..yeah these two love each other

i was thinking maybe karmi has a cousin (or any relative really) thats a boy and around her age and when him and hiro meet she forgets to mention its her cousin (or some sort of relative) and hiro gets jealous? i think that would be hilarious. and i dont know if you are going along with the storyline of karmi leaving, but if you arent, then maybe they have a project and they are assigned as partners? maybe it could be that they have to watch a deocumentery or a movie or something and it ends up being a make up "hang out"/ date for their last one? ps: your stories are reallly good :)

Ooh keep up the great work SpongeGuy! You had me laughing throughout.

FUCK HIRO X KARMI

It SHOULD BE HIRO X GOGO

Gassp Hiro said the d word

Funny, cute and sweet story!

So good! I love the fluff, and the 'silent question' and the final metaphor. Although, maybe you could have them doing something while they have their conversation? Or break it up with some action or humour or other characters or whatever suits your writing style. Just my advice- I hope it helps. But still, Karmi and Hiro both have great character development and I really like how Karmi isn't just sad the entire time- this is an issue I find with some other fanfics. People can feel more than one thing at once! And sometimes they don't fully show how they feel. I believe you handled this very well.

Aww esto es tan lindo
así debe comenzar la amistad de esos dos
antes de ser algo mas uwu'
buen fanfic
espero escribas otro pronto :D
hasta la próxima! x3

Aww this is so cute
so should the friendship of those two begin
before being something else uwu '
good fanfic
I hope you write another one soon : D
until next time! x3

Hiro pushes Karmi out of the way when a truck almost runs over her and he ends up in a coma.

Aww esto me parece tan dulce y tierno -w-
amo y adoro esta ship TwT
me alegra ver que mas personas escriban de ellos dos :'D
buen fanfic :3

Aww this seems so sweet and tender to me -w-
I love and adore this ship TwT
I'm glad to see more people write about them two :'D
good fanfic :3

That was so cute! I totally take as Canon the fact that they do it! I always liked the idea of Grandville catching Karmi and Hiro in the middle of a kiss in the lab. These nerds would be a complete mess. It's great to see such a light fanfic after what happened in City of Monsters. Grace was great at this story and the amazing writing! To the next!

Cool! Looking forward to more !

It's so fluffy I could die

awwww that was soooo cute
but let's be honest, in reality Grandville would yell the hell out of them and then let them leave