Love your story! Its very original and a great twist on the plot- I also love how Dandan is stumbling over her fruit. Lol

Keep it up!

Lu's at least, like, three hundred limbs full and that'll barely hold him lmao.

like this so far, hilarious and also really, really exciting. :3

I found this story yesterday and I was intrigued. So, I spent all day reading it. I don't regret it one bit. It really captured my attention. Of course, I'm now fangirling for this ship that never crossed my mind before. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Omg Marco finally ships it!

this bloody chapter had been really amazing, the execution of the comedy is perfect. i feel like having asthma after doing all that laughing on when the are panicking for Dadan's well-being and Marco choking, wheezing at the hilariousness of the situation. I love the I Chemistry of

i love everything about this omg! 8u

This is such an interesting take on Dadan! I think this book is amazing and it’s really interesting to read as not many fanfictions that I have read touch much on Dadan. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

As always, so much fun to read. I missed the last chapter, so I could read two at once. Yes!

About Corona, they really are crazy. I mean the number of people who die of the flue every year is many times higher than that of those who died of this the last half year. They overreact, I am sure.
And summer heat? Where are you? Should it not be either early spring or autumn?

I love the fact that we’ve gone from Marco basically hating Dadan and really suspicious of her, to him gossiping (or at least going to) with Jozu about her and Whitebeard XD

Yes! Two new chapters! I liked this one , Dadan finds out she does not have to learn anything about medicine at all, her fruit simply works on its own. Will she come to terms with it?

Gud chaps...so touching

Oh how i love this story! It's the best one piece fanfiction I have ever come across!

Before reading this, I had never even considered reading about Dadan. Let alone even picture Dadan as anyone's love interest.

But this is just brilliant. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!

I am not sure Whitebeard is really in the same situation as parents though. While his crew sees him as a father and he likes that, all of the crew members were grown-ups when they joined, already were who they are.

And about the actual chapter: Nice, like always. I liked how Dadan got Whitebeard to finally wear the warm clothes.
And the two bandits seem to be more clever than I had originally thought, dressing white because of the changed environment

This was a cute chapter! Whitebeard needs to also realize how the rest of the world would handle his passing. Are the rest of the crew prepared for this possibility? When he dies, the war they'll get into with other Yonko over territories or other pirates in general attacking the rest of the Whitebeard Pirates for their bounties.
It was cute how Dadan got Whitebeard to wear more layers. Playing on his caring nature to get things done.
I hope things between Dadan and Ace get better, or have an understanding between the two. Even if it's just acknowledging they both don't hate each other.
GREAT GREAT work once again.

Nice chapter again. Ace really can be not-nice.
Even though it is quite late in the year already, which only becomes clearer with all the things that have happened already, hapy new year to you too