Reviews for The Tale of An Imp
Death korps boi chapter 11 . 11/17/2019
Will the memory erasing mangos make a cameo in the story?
FleshyBalloon chapter 11 . 11/17/2019
lookin good, keep on keepin on.
EatMyIceCream chapter 11 . 11/16/2019
Will he become more important in the story or will he stay as a background character.
FleshyBalloon chapter 10 . 11/7/2019
nice cant wait to read more of this!
The Lazy Dragon chapter 10 . 11/5/2019
Good grief what a good battle!
You've improved since
The last time by alot!
Tho I feel were a bit underpowered rn... what ever good job on the chapter
The Lazy Dragon chapter 9 . 11/1/2019
Oh you've done it theres barely any bold text now! Gj!
A.R.O.B2000 chapter 9 . 11/1/2019
Fantastic chapter good chapter not so many bold words good job it was super but a bit short any way if you have Windows 10 or one of the iPhone computers be careful what you download on it they are not protected like the old versions they are based on speed optimization and memory processing not data protection I am saying this bcs I am somebody who has to repair them every time they get broken or when they get a virus .
See ya in the next chapter ...now back to work sigh.
EatMyIceCream chapter 8 . 10/27/2019
Will he become important or will he just be another minion?
The Lazy Dragon chapter 8 . 10/13/2019
It's doing really great so far! (In my opinion) and yes your habit is a bit annoying but not annoying enough that disturbs the story. Now what do to with exp bottles...
I think you shoul give shar the exp to everyone in with the most strongest one like our leader 2 10k exp bottle but obviously we atleast 3 10k exp bottles
A.R.O.B2000 chapter 7 . 10/7/2019
Hello there fallenhunter , this my first reviewing your I wish to question you on the matter about why do make the information about those evolution so long you can just them short and easy like:"snow impling ": the one who evolved to live in the cold tundra it has all the related ability's to the ice or the wind since both of those elements are the component of the cold." That's all you don't need to go overboard in the explanation you can use that to develop the story also don't take this as a flame is just a friendly criticism that's all.

I will see you on the next episode of the dragon Ball z ... No seriously I will see you on the next chapter.
The Lazy Dragon chapter 7 . 10/6/2019
Welp will the impling have an evolution immune/resistance to fire/heat in the future? Ooooh! I just thought of an skill in the VERY FAR future
Do you know esdeath from akame ga kill
Well her special ability/trump card is where in a entire area she freezes everything to the point where time seems to stop
No covering in ice just like slowing the enemy down so much it's like stopping time
messias.santos233 chapter 6 . 10/2/2019
eu escolho o Arch Impling
Tryshot chapter 6 . 10/2/2019
Arch Impling
Is this the comments
shinigamisama455 chapter 6 . 10/1/2019
I vote arch impling elite a later evolution might give him flight and if not you dont need to fly to be strong. frost while ice is cool a weakness to fire that large isn't. regular arch impling Grant's no boost except all three affinity. and while arch implying may only grant two main elements that's enough you can have either pure offense or offense and defense plus 3 of your stats start out higher then the others even if you dont know which
Unknown Eldritch chapter 6 . 10/1/2019
Personally, my vote is for the Arch Frost Impling
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