You shouldn't have added the homosexuality or religion thing as it was unneeded and added nothing. You could have gotten rid of Hermione by pointing out her vile personality or any of her numerous flaws as well as pointing out that she has no redeemable qualities.

Great job!

I am definitely adding this to my favorites! That rune is wonderful, just imagine it would stop Barty Jr. from approaching him to kidnap him and Voldemort would be dead trying to kill him every year.

Enjoyed the story thanks

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I find it very difficult to believe that twelve-year-old Draco actually intended to harm or kill another student seriously enough to activate the ward stone. And if he did, why didn't Dumbledore? Dumbledore actively harmed students in the school - by hiding the Philosopher's Stone to lure Voldemort, by placing all the traps, by ignoring bullying students and teachers, by allowing a dark object to be brought into the school to possess a student, by knowing that the Chamber of Secrets had been opened and a basilisk was roaming the school and keeping it a secret. If Snape dropped dead, Dumbledore should have as well.

this story needs to be expanded upon and made into a multi-chapter story

great story love it :)

You should have left out the bit about homosexuals. Everyone is entitled to their beliefs. Many people believe in God and the Bible does say that homosexuality is a sin.

bonne fic!

tks for sharing

Woot!

Terrible

Thank you for this good story.

I've read this before but didn't realize it was published this year. I wasn't surprised the first time I read this that Fumblemort had an informant watching Harry at King Cross Station. The old man always was a control freak. I never understood where he got the idea that only he knew what was best for every witch and wizard in the world. I really liked the idea of Fumblemort losing all of his jobs and likely spending some quality time in the Azkaban Spa and Resort. Might do him some good to see just how badly he fucked up the magical world. Harry activating the Hogwarts Ward Stone and killing Snape as well as several children was very unfortunate. But then Snape should never've been allowed to be a teacher. Sure, he's a Potions Master but that doesn't mean he can teach children. And Fumblemort bringing such a dangerous object into a SCHOOL was insane! He deliberately endangered every student's life in the school. So to me, that means he threw away any right to remain as Headmaster of the school. As for his other two jobs? Both are full-time jobs yet he still held those offices. Besides, he'd held them for around fifty years. Which reminds me of some of the American Senators who once they get in never seem to leave until they die. Strong Therman( hope I spelled that right ) was in his nineties and still in office but from what I saw of him he was sleeping while an important debate was being held. Reminded me so much of Fumblemort.