hope you do another (longer) one

Love Seven and Chakotay. Wished Voyager explored more on their story.

Thank you for your working.
One thing i never like st novel is lazy writing, or even worse, they looks like some fans working, one of example is how they cope with the most notorious enemy in st, the Borg. After reading some of them, then noDoubt why writer has little contribution to st canon. Thanks to godCBS these all are no canon.
But I appreciate your work concerning early stage when 7 was on board. I found in canon/show Chakotay's attitude towards seven is sometimes contradictory, perhaps due to lazy writing, sometimes he strong against her, sometimes he is more kind than others. You deal with his attitude very well. I can see how 7's behavior changed him.
Thank u for your good work.

Brilliantly done! I'm not familiar with the novelisation canon you drew on for the Borg detail, but you included that in an accessible way and it worked in very poignantly.

Their interactions were just perfect for this stage of canon, testy and confused by each other, but both still tolerating and trying to understand. I always really like how you write Chakotay but especially here, he's still in command and empathetic but the farthest thing from passive, irritated, frustrated, confused. You make him a whole character, and make Seven painfully vulnerable while not demoting her strength in any way. The content of the vision was inspired and believable.

WELL DONE and thanks so much for writing! :D

scifiromance

first things first this is leagues better than what I wrought and I'm really happy with how must of this came together. however and I cant blame you for this but that stuff you included from the star trek destiny novels is bloody odd.

seriously that's what those books chose to explain the Borgs opession with Omega? givening them a god their trying to fuel up so it can go home? that's possible the dumbest reason for why the borg are the way they are and what drives them ive ever herd and that includes the BS Vegger stuff which was alreadly megga dumb.

honestly id prefer it if youd had come up with your own reason fro why the Borg desire Omega or just not explained it. as including that dragges what would have otherwise being a great one shot story down.

I really liked everything else though. what you had sevens grounding items be. the phot of her parents or was it and interview the tanget kind of confused me with that one I must admit but that's likely more a me thing than a issue with your story. the Borg data node, (I presume it got transported over with seven and the other drones) and sevens cermic raven model.

this was also supiseinly witty and funny in places, so codos

I give this 8/10 the only thing that drags this end is the stuff you've included from the destiny novals and their odd ass over complaction of Borg stuff. seriously what were they thinking?

Yours Alaster Boneman