Amazing story so far, I love it

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I love how the whole story goes through both SO and Danmachi. It's like how the anime should have been in my opinion. Bell being weighed heavily by the death of his loved ones truly gave my heart a tug. It is not usual to find stories that can touch one's heart; this is especially true for fan fictions. I think a good plot line to further the story is for Bell to meet Freya face-to-face prematurely after a battle with Asterios (Red). When Freya meets Bell for the first time, his Maxi Naga developmental ability or skill could unexpectedly cause a reaction with Freya. I hope you continue this storyline! Reading this really is enjoyable! Stay safe mate!

yes though tbh even if a lot are time travel fics this one really is a good one some things i like was 1 he isn't immediately OP 2 he makes an effort not to distort the time line too much 3 the fact that you give all the girls their own moments at first i was leaning towards just aiz but after this and chapter 4 i think you could pull off a harem ending one in which ryuu,filvis,lefiya and eina are in still quite sad about SO volume 11 so im glad i read chapter 4 anyway great job i hope the updates will come in more frequently but i know it takes time for it to be great so take The you time

Love the new chapter it was really good keep it up.

This was good. The portion with Eina was done so much better than with Ryu. Where th at felt ham fisted, this felt more natural and made sense. One thing to always take into account with a time traveler's interaction with others, is the character of those individuals. Why I felt Ryu's failed is that considering her backstory and history Bell's insight and actions should have alarmed her and made her distrustful of him. Ryu's response went against her character.
Here Eina's response works really well. By acting so familiar and caring with her, actions built by time the two have not spent together in this timeline, he has inadvertently played on her crush for him. This unintentionally result comes off more natural and fitting while being adorable in this case.
Keep in mind always. When Bell acts on his future experiences, how would a regular person take it, then add in the background of the character he is interacting with. Would that character misunderstand, be alarmed, or grow distrustful because of his knowledge and/or actions.

These interactions are what will make your story stand out instead of being a canon retelling with an OP far you are doing the course and you should be fine. I wish you luck.

finaly so eina confiremed in harem will she be the head wife XD

No worries about the alteration. It was a magnificent chapter again. Hope to see more soon.

great chapter

Glad to see an update, the outing with Eina. Keep it up. Thanks for the reply.

Bell become a lady killer. By bow he's targetting Eina without even knowing he's already hitting on her. Hahaha.. what a dense head of a man Bell became. Good story sir and i do hope to once more be able to read a next chapter. A job well done and God bless.

Lol, did he just propose to her? And did she just accept?

I doubt Bell is completely insensitive. He just needs to better understand the girls in his life to prevent any more incidents like to erupt in the near future. Just stating my opinion.

Absolutely wonderful chapter, it's nice to read something with just a bit less important story elements going on, and instead good old character development. I was particularly happy with Eina at the end there, was entirely too adorable. Very interested to see where you take this story, but I can only see good things stemming from it.

P.S - It may be mildly presumptuous, in which case you have my sincere apologies, but if you'd like someone to Beta this story, then I'd be happy to do so, anything to see this story continue!

P.P.S - As you've probably noticed, I type rather formally, yeah? For this little segment, **** that. So uhhhh... as far as I can tell this is going to have some level of harem involved, and I wanted to know, is there any chance of Riveria being part of such a thing? Like, I will honestly write an essay entirely pleading to you to do such a thing, it'd be absolutely amazing.

When it reaches to Lili Maybe...He'll save her way faster than intended...That's my guess