| Reviews for When Everything Falls Away |
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SlythindorRen chapter 1 . 5/7 Damn, you're such a good writer and I'm here for it! You know just exactly how to tug on heart strings and make me really feel like I'm right there with Goku, it's totally nuts! |
pkstarstorm64 chapter 1 . 10/21/2019 This was masterfully written and very emotional. Well done, beautiful work. |
o- Nyx -o chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 I really enjoyed this! agreed! we needed more emotion from Goku regards to gohans "death", dammit! very well done! so many feels in the whole of your fic. I loved it! |
Pixelfun20 chapter 1 . 9/22/2019 I love I love I LOVE protective daddy Goku. Please update soon, your style of writing is amazing! |
Kirbylover99 chapter 1 . 9/10/2019 This was so heart-wrenching and Weill written! I can’t wait to read more of this (hopefully lengthy) AU! Well done! |
Anon chapter 1 . 9/9/2019 Now that I can read it, absolutely fantastic. Always great when a writer expands upon what a character feels, especially a character like Goku. Most think he only cares about fighting, but that really isn't true. Sure, Goku won't be winning any "Father of the Year" awards anytime soon, but he does truly love his family. And there will be hell to pay if you even consider hurting them. |
M. Almeida chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 Well, your muse was on fire, huh?! That was fast. Haha Oh, the ANGST. I love seeing this side of Goku, yes, he’s the goofy happy guy we all know and love, but mess with his family... yeah, I wouldn’t do that. Amazing as always! |
sigmakleim chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 Dad Goku is just too precious even in a situation such as this. |
firstar28 chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 I love your DBZ works, and I can't wait to read this one, but something is wrong. There's a bunch of extra words mixed in with your text. |