| Reviews for I was too shy to become your sun, so I became a cold moon |
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JaDe In NighT chapter 4 . 7/11 This is starting again. Nice , can't wait to see what will happen |
Gigi chapter 4 . 6/22 Lol Kakashi is a weirdo. I hope he actually teaches her something useful. He literally only taught his genin the water and tree walking exercises and that was it. Only Sasuke got to learn Kakashi's famous chidori. But he did not teach his group any other useful ninjustsu, didn't encourage weapons training beyond kunai or shuriken, and did not teach them any elemental jutsu. |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/6 Finally, I found a story I like, only for it to not be finished! Please finish this |
DarknekoKurai chapter 4 . 5/31 This is awesome! I been looking for a good pairing for them! Thanks for sharing. It means a lot to me. |
FyreDraagyn12 chapter 4 . 4/29 Lol Swiss cheese, Kakashi is a huge troll. This is lovely, looking forward to the next chapter! |
draculyn28 chapter 4 . 4/28 good chapter |
myafroatemydog chapter 4 . 4/22 Might gai is honestly my favorite character. I loved this chapter |
musicluver246 chapter 4 . 4/21 Can't wait to read more. |
SentinalSlice chapter 4 . 4/21 I can’t wait for more of this! I love the relationship between Neji and Naruto! Anyway, please keep up the great work! And Stay Healthy Too! |
Thinker90 chapter 4 . 4/20 It's confirmed! Switzerland exists! |
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 4 . 4/20 How fun! Also yay! Naruto is actually trained by Kakashi in this instead of basically told to "figure shit out" and left alone. Wonder how the team is gonna function when they can't look at her as a dead last or idiot because she'll know more than them and be more accomplished than them even more in this version? And how will Kakashi and Naruto bond? Naruto doesn't seem to like or really trust him. Also can Lee become Naruto's second best friend? |
Tetradical chapter 4 . 4/20 Awesome! |
The Sibyl chapter 4 . 4/20 I love this story, I love the interactions I love the dialogue, and I’m so sorry about this, but I stayed up reading till 2 AM and my OCD has compelled me. Irregardless is a double negative. It doesn’t mean what you think it means. |
estellagriffin175 chapter 4 . 4/19 Hi I love this story and I’m always so excited to see a new update! It’s so well written but I’m sorry to do this but you used irregardless and it’s not a word it should just be regardless. |
Otterly.adorkable chapter 4 . 4/19 I really really really hate Hiruzen. I don't like how he didn't do anything to stop the discrimination against Naruto in the anime, besides giving that flimsy speech after Minato died. For goodness sake, he's the Hokage! He could have changed the curriculum to separate the "demons" from their containers. He could have made his speech AFTER the village had recovered from the Kyuubi's attack, when everyone had recovered and in the right state of minds (because hello! grief!) And this is just to name a few. The reason why I'm writing this is because of the brief pov from Hiruzen and Neji's comment on how Naruto's relationship with the Hokage is textbook manipulation. I just hate the thought of a child suffering because of other people's pigheaded ignorance. Other than that, you're doing really good Ms. Tsume Yuki! Thank you for the chapter and I hope you stay safe and happy! |