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  amaia chapter 1 . 12/23/2019 Fantastic...my only regret is that it's a one-shot. I want MORE, 'cause my mind is stuck on the angry sex. |
 JamaicanTIVAlover chapter 1 . 9/19/2019 Stop teasing us please! Aaaarrrggghhh! This is great! I want to read more! I love it! Tiva reuniting & having angry sex? Oh yeah! Lol Love Gibbs letting Ziva know that he know what went down! Hahaha I was a little confused with Tali's age here, as she's supposed to be 5 now. But I guess you wanted her dialogue with Gibbs to be a little more. Unless this fic is set in 2021! Anyways, that doesn't take away anything from this awesome fic. But add some sassiness to it. :-) Thanks for this story. |
| Puck and Rachel fan chapter 1 . 9/16/2019 Loved this Brandy |
| Hetwaszoietsals chapter 1 . 9/14/2019 I can so see this happening! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2019 When is this supposed to be taking place? If now, Tali is not seven years old. And her vocabulary is too adult for a child her age |
| sds136 chapter 1 . 9/11/2019 I positively loved this story! You made Tali to be just as sassy as Dinozzo can be! |
| DS2010 chapter 1 . 9/11/2019 Yup angry sex can work towards peace. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 Good story. Thank you. |
| Diana chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 This is wonderful. Thanks for posting |
| guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 Such an amazing piece! Love the style and it's so plausible, was a joy to read |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 Thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you |
| Patti Lipscomb chapter 1 . 9/7/2019 Was send a message. I don't know if it posted. I want Ziva to learn from Gibbs or McGee that Tony has moved on. He came back from Paris. Took a job in Atlanta and began dating a kindergarten teacher at Tali's school , but she wasn't Tali's teacher. Ziva had not kept up with Tony and Tali. Tony and Kristine or Kris were happiky married. Kris had adopted Tali and now Tony and Kris were expecting a baby. I feel like this because Ziva treated Tony so badly. |
| Patti Lipscomb chapter 1 . 9/7/2019 Everyone is wanting a reunion. I want a story where Gibbs or McGee have to tell Ziva that Tony has moved on. Seems Ziva didn't keep up with Tony and Tali. That after almost two years, thinking she had died, he met a woman named Kristine or Kris, that was. A kindergarten teacher at Tali's school, but not Tali's teacher. Tony had returned to the US and say moved to Atlanta and Tony and Kris had married, Kris had adopted Tali and Tony and Kris were happily married |
| Gingerstorm101 chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 Omg that was me that Gibbs and Tali should take a walk! I never knew a fic would stem from it! I loved it btw! It’s probably going to be closer to how it’s going to play |
| Zuolen chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 very well written story and quite in-character too! You did really well with this. I'm truly enjoying your style, please write more :) |
