excellent chapter

Love the first chapter! They are so little AU with Percy being the child of Athena. Keep going and keep writing! I will always support you :)

nice job

great job with the chapter

great job with the chapter

good chapter

good chapter

good chapter. maybe Shadow for the Hellhound

Full Name: Timothy James Dixon

Nick Names: Tim, Timmy, TD, TJ, etc...

Gender: Male

Sexual Preference: Straight

Age: 16-18

Personality: Protective, kind, warm and gentle of those close to him. Distant and uncaring to most strangers, but protects the innocents no matter the cost to him personally. Cold, brutal and cruel to his enemies and his family's enemies. Sarcastic, but serious he hides behind a smile to hide deep seeded rage and pain. He seldom talks and says very little. Quick to protect and long to forgive should you harm someone dear to him. He is generally quiet, but can become very passionate and loud if provoked.

Looks: Dark Brown hair (or black hair), blue green eyes, matured face, slightly tan. Six foot tall, well built, but not super muscular. Flat top for the hair cut. Scars all over his body ranging from piercing and slicing, to fire and acid, only his face is saved from scars.

Clothes usually worn: Black Trench Coat. Black Cloak. Black Hoodie, a long sleeved black button up black shirt. Black Jeans. Black Military boots. A small backpack

Family: Mother: Jennifer Dixon age: 44 status dead. Father: Jeff Dixon age: 51 status dead. Siblings: Brother: Jonathan Dixon age: 15 status dead.

Godly heritage: Son Thanatos

not a bad start

The goddess in prison, is it Artemis ? I mean it's the only one that makes sense, last chapter she left because there was an eavesdropper.

You surprise me with the daughter of Nix, I honestly thought it was a daughter of Hades.

an amazing concept. one question though, shouldn't Perseus be a godling?

I'm truly impressed that Percy accepted, after all, that opportunity was like the perfect revenge.
I mean in chapter 1 Percy saw how his father was killed by a *silver* arrow.

Quite different and unique story you have here, I'm looking forward for more.
I assume that do to the circumstances Percy and Artemis will be spending time together ? Be it willingly, by accident or forced (¿?)

Edgy villain is edgy. Uninteresting. More interested in the Percy/hunters dynamic. Should of long waited to introduce a villain. Also, he’s at the border, how tf is he even seeing the pavilion, especially since you make it seem like he’s outside of it.

Hellhound was a nice touch... but then it was a spy(new flash, you need a mark, be taken over etc to be an actual spy)

Needs a lot of work, but the initial idea, minus the villain is a good one.

Yeah the villain/unknown figure is not a selling point for the fic... I’ll keep going but so far uninteresting