This chapter just ruined the story. Too much plot armour keeping the mob boss alive for no reason.

It was good but think you should have made harry MoD. the res. stone would have come in handy at so many points in this story it was like i was internally screaming about it. that would have left harry and dawn as a couple that would live hea.

Pretty sure "to knock someone up" is not just British slang.

Backwards magic is words backwards, sentences forwards

Fun story.

Very nice.

Quite good. Too bad about Dawn and Harry not hooking up permanently. In Buffy/Harry crosses that is one of my fav pairings. Also too bad Baba Yaga got talked out of destroying the British Wizzy World. The few witches and wizards worth anything are quite few, less than 22 in my opinion. They could have fled and the sheep in Britains magical world could have been killed. Worthless sheep. I'm so glad the Malfoys were killed. May they burn in hell.

That was a rather impressive piece of crossover writing. Here, have a cook-er, a review for the stellar effort you put into this.

Um... shaking head to clear it... that was a hoot!

Good story, but Lollipops are 'suckers', not 'stickers' in the US a sticker is a colorful little picture with a back that's sticky, little kids collect them.

Also Dawn and Harry's confusion about slang early on: I've never heard anyone in the US use the phrase 'knock me up' for contact me, but Dawn would certainly be aware of 'knocked up' meaning pregnant, that's a fairly common slang usage in the US.

Not a Sopranos fan, but a HP one, and that was a twist to have Charlie buying the hit on Harry. Looks like something strange is going on. Looking forward to more.

Thanks for the story.

Tom A.

CHARLIE? NO freaking way! dang it and I was about to go to bed... now I CAN'T b ecause I just HAVE to know what happens!

Great story..

I really liked the story! It was lotsa fun :D I also loved the winks to Stargate ;P

Rose

Charlie Weasley arranging a hit on Harry Potter?