Reviews for Fourth Route
WesternReader chapter 14 . 9h
But seriously. The whole thing with Archer is that you can say his actions weren't really ever wrong. From a reasonable perspective what he did is for the best for pretty much everyone else. Just not him. And a big part of his character is that he died with no regrets. So the only issue is that he doesn't like being a counter guardian and one of the reason he's okay with UBW shirou at the end is because he's strong enough that he probs won't be forced to become a counter guardian. Also he kinda remembers why he's did what he did originally. Honestly, counter guardian Shirou is a pretty alright dude suffering from depression.
WesternReader chapter 13 . 9h
Kinda lame. Archer kinda realized his ideal just not in the way he wanted.
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 53 . 7/17
Man this is one of the most awesome stories ever! Please don't leave it here! You really need to continue this! One of the few stories where shirou is not a fucking retard... so please update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter! And do use some method to give shirou more circuits. This weakness is grating. Why does he have such abysmal magical potential everytime? Maybe he can get a new body with more magical circuits?
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 43 . 7/16
You wrote illya instead of rin by mistake.
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 42 . 7/16
Are you actually French? You keep mentioning them too much to be a coincidence...
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 33 . 7/16
Meh... why can't UBW have better noble phantasms! Mou! He should have atleast gotten Ea. Shiro with Ea would have been awesome! And isn't it supposed to be quadruple accel? Meh...
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 32 . 7/16
Lol! Artoria x cu Chullain is awesome! Never seen than one before!
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 30 . 7/16
Yeah... it's never good to have your chance to sodomize someone being interrupted by the apocalypse...
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 28 . 7/16
I hope you actually write the smut scene...
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 27 . 7/16
Don't mind the idiots bro. Love this fic! So few original ideas. This is supposed to be fanfiction. Morons everywhere. It's boring reading the same old theme. This is awesome! Please don't mind what anyone else says. You've done an amazing job! Please write more!
bamba12 chapter 11 . 7/13
The start is decent enough but by now this is just unreadable, the word usage and sentence structure is absolutely horrible, especially the conversations.
I am getting the impression the author tried to write what he believes would be a high class way of phrasing things but unfortunately the result is just a jumble of what the author believes are "big" words, instead the characters just seem ridiculous (People don't talk like that, if it was one character it could've been taken as a character quirk but that it isn't the case, everyone talks like that in the fic" even when the sentence structure or the word used isn't just plain wrong.
lmc9389 chapter 53 . 7/7
Good story. Plenty of humor and lore. Hoping we’ll get to see more of the other characters that have been a little neglected. I wonder if we’ll see Arcueid since Altrouge is beginning to move
lmc9389 chapter 52 . 7/7
Those were good explanations for the true magics. It’d be cool to see concepts for those beyond the first five
lmc9389 chapter 41 . 7/7
I really like the expansion to convoluted and not well explained cannon lore. Not many writers bring in the less well known fate, tsukihime and other less well known type moon aspects
lmc9389 chapter 39 . 7/7
Yo what happened with caster
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