This is both hilariously and sadly accurate to both the show and the fandom combined,i agree lincoln needs at least some character development like his sisters did as the season go by. The thing were the writers keep introducing random characters we dont know of and then just completely forget about that character as if it never shipping war part is absolutely true people fighting over which ship is better. The whole lincoln being worshipped as a saint is so true, I've seen many fan arts and fanfic of lincoln being all perfect and loved even though he is far from who he really is and he's not perfect ,and the thing were lincoln screws every girl that appeard onscreen really angers me not to mention the 'loudcest' were lincoln fucks all of his sisters, hell they even have kids which in the fandom know as the 'sin kids' which really ticks me off. But the point is,yeah, the writers are dumb and the fandom is insane. Of course thank you for making this fanfic you are one of the best loud house fanfic authors I've seen hope you make more

Muy buena

You also should’ve saved this bashing after “stall monitor” and the Casagrandes’ episode, “the horror-scope.”

I’m the same guest who made the latest post, along with the post saying Lincoln’s character is in trouble. Other than that and something that was missed, this is not bad. It’s mostly good. But now, you should’ve made this story after kings of the con and the announcement of the loud house: a very loud Christmas.

“My character is so stale-“ - Lincoln Wilson.

Underdeveloped? Yes I can say. Behind everyone else in terms of character development? I can agree with that. But I refuse to believe that Lincoln loud is stale. I don’t hate him at all though.

After watching most of the episodes for the casagrandes, it’s okay, but after two of those episodes, Yup, Reina was right not to have much hope for the spin-off. “The horror-scope” doesn’t help her case, Lincoln Wilson’s case, nor my opinion (but that episode was an improvement over “kings of the con” and “stall monitor” in my opinion). And if the writers don’t build up Ronniecoln over time and make it official one of these days, I’m just quitting both shows.

I take back the Aesop amnesia part. They should stop making applicable episodes where he makes a plan that results from jumping to conclusions irrationally after something he listens to or sees.

Hi. I’m the same guest who said “I refuse to believe Lincoln is underdeveloped.” I take it back. I don’t hate or dislike him in spite of past episodes, and it should stay like that, but his character is in trouble. He needs his proper character development. Clyde too. The writers better improve the two of them for the better. Especially make him stand up for himself more, not be a doormat anymore not only to his sisters, but also to random people like students. And make more episodes with Lincoln bonding with his sisters individually, STOP making episodes where Lincoln suffers as a butt monkey such as in “Kings of the con”, doesn’t resort to being manipulative or making plans for stupid reasons, and have him and Ronnie Anne build up and sort their feelings for each other out over time in their own episodes, to the point he and Ronnie Anne really do become boyfriend and girlfriend. As for Clyde, he needs 2 episodes where he gets to know Lori and Bobby, and they can become friends. Those are some examples out of the entire amount I’ll put in.

This would make a great episode. Well at least to several fans who aren’t crazy.

This isn’t bad. What I don’t agree with is Lincoln saying he’s underdeveloped. I refuse to believe that.

This story falls prey to the mistake of many meta fics, which is the dialogue that reads like a written review, rather than a narrative. Characters speak in paragraphs at a time, with such detail that it sounds like they are reading from a list instead of talking to another person. It feels unnatural and wooden.
I know the point of meta fics is to address the shortcomings of the show/fandom, but the dialogue has to be well-incorporated into the narrative in order to feel like the characters are having an actual conversation.

This is why your one of my favorite authors

Jesus Christ this is pessimistic.

I really just don’t know how to feel about this. I’m at a complete loss.

My mind and my heart is spinning around about it, but i’d give you an 11/10 for sheer genius writing!

If you ever manage to get into Nickelodeon Studios itself, you’ve got to show this to the Loud House cast and crew.

Good luck with that.

Wow. This has to be the most meta story ever. Very impressive.