Thx for the update
Like the start so far
Hope you update soon

A long overdue chapter indeed. I actually didn't realize this was published back in September. I figured it was November for some reason.

Regardless! I've had an excellent time working with you on this. Congratulations on the chapter release; here's hoping this is the second of many to come in the future!

-Absalom Father of Peace/Heretic's Fork

A self-insert can be done correctly, it just takes a little time. Work hard and you'll get it. If not, then, eh, whatever.

Okay, this look interesting enough. I hope it doesn't have the usual goody-happy-go-lucky idiot of a MC.
Maybe try to have him have drive to be powerful so he could survive in this world. I mean dragons, demons, God of death, dark Wizard.
He needs to be prepared and horde as much power as he can to survive.

I can't wait to see more of this.

A nice prologue. I don’t know what you want to do with this story but I’m interested to see what you got planned. Personally I hope you don’t spend too much time showing your OC training. One of the most annoying things I find in any self insert fanfiction is when the author publishes chapters that focuses on the OC training to get stronger before anything happens. It’s both boring and frustrating if you ask me. Anyway I can’t wait to see your next chapter!