| Reviews for Never Alone |
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serenacp0 chapter 5 . 6/19 Pls tell me you are still continuing this story |
Sauron's Wrath chapter 5 . 6/17 I just imagined Joanna as a werewolf and one of Dracula's minions already in Planetos. Is that too much? |
Dominus1389 chapter 5 . 5/27 Can't wait to see West and North as a friends instead of enemies and Lyanna as Werewolf He could save Joanna by lets say sniffing out a slow acting poison or turn her into Werewolf marking her as his pup it would also save Tyrion's future |
TurtleIssues chapter 1 . 4/12 Holy crap im loving this story hoping your are staying safe and keeping up the good ork |
DipstickMadden chapter 5 . 4/10 This story is epic so far! Please write more! I love it so much, no one gives werewolves the correct amount of respect anymore |
Saurons Wrath chapter 4 . 4/6 He says he’ll kill him quickly, but then he let’s him die slowly? What the hell? That is the worst character controversy I’ve seen! |
Stonerguy420 chapter 5 . 3/24 I'm loving his friendship with Tywin and hope he saves Joanna somehow and I can't wait for him and lyanna |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/22 Hey authors! You guys okay? Not updating for a while is fine, but with the current situation it's worrying when the ANs aren't even updated that you're fine and taking a break or something |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/10 This story is currently my favorite thing on this site. Thanks for the chapters, it's all so well done I couldn't stop reading until I cleared all five chapters lol. I very much look forward to what you'll do in the coming chapters :D |
ElderLucian chapter 2 . 3/8 After reading the prologue and first chapter I can say I'm excited to see more of this story. I'm curious just what knowledge Lucian brought with him and how it will effect Westeros |
Sauron's Wrath chapter 5 . 3/6 Very good chapter. They way you wrapped in Hearthstone really works well, Martin may even approve. Don't quote me on that. Steffon Baratheon is every bit like his son's, but his appearance does concern me a bit. I originally thought we were much further in the ASOIAF timeline, but if he's here I assume the Defiance of Duskendale has not happened yet. That's going to be interesting with Lucian about. But it does concern me with the pairing you made. I mean yeah, it's common practice for medieval societies like this to marry off girls much younger than their counterpart should be, but it's still... ugh. ESPECIALLY (I capitalize for drama) because Lucian is freaking 400-years-old-however-you-put-him and Lyanna is nonexistent; I think. So I understand if you do, but I don't support the pairing. So I recommend to develop the character for Lucian, maybe change the pairing. Just a suggestion. Aside from that, you're doing a great job guiding the story and showing where Lucian wants to be right now. He's got a clear goal, he's making those tiny steps and building his way up in Westeros. That Damascus steel bit truly shows that he's an able man who can be an incredible source of income, and no doubt as other greedy lords recognize that they're gonna want his secrets, putting him in a precarious situation and maybe, just maybe, making him realize how much of a situation he's in. Because while you make make his character astute to the situation, you don't clarify that he's prepared for what he's walking into, making me feel like he hasn't fully grasped what's happening around him. This is normal given he's completely new, but he doesn't show any recognition to the events throughout the story, which worries me for his development as a character internally. I hope the next chapter holds a lot more of that, and I'll see you then. |
osterreicher97 chapter 5 . 3/5 Very interesting and definitely following. |
s.k.f.f.f chapter 5 . 3/5 very interesting, though i wonder how nobles will take into consideration its fake valeryian steel, would that matter wven though its more durable? |
winterwolf23543 chapter 5 . 3/5 Fuck! that ending! Lucian and Tywin has a interesting bond it's like Lucian is improves kevan lannister, but a wolf! I'm excited to see when he see's the other child lords like the Baratheon , Tully and Stark family~ Ned and Robert will surely look up to lucian I hope so~ |
naruto chapter 5 . 3/5 great chapter keep it up |