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UPDATE chapter 3 . 7/16 That being said, the whole Hanabi bit was a little odd.. if Hanabi were after just Naruto then alright, but both of them? I don't know. Great fic nonetheless. vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv |
UPDATE chapter 3 . 7/16 Bro! This is the best Naruto fanfiction I've ever read! The balance of comedy, romance, mystery and action is just too good! Please update this- the cliffhanger is blue balling all of us so hard! |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/12 Hey, this is pretty interresting. The harem shennanigans got old fast though. But the plot was interresting, and some of the interactions were fun. I'm curious to see what happens next. Also can Naruto's Sasuke show up be all derisive towards his counterpart? Also Sakura, Sakura needs to give this over the top fangirl a talking to. Hated the Hanabi subplot, that was just disturbing. Really curious to see how Minato'll react, and how people will react to seeing Naru's memories. Overall this fic has potential, but is bogged down by creepy and annoying harem subplots. I like Naruko tho. She's fun. Also here are some fic recs, bc why not? Time Braid by ShaperV Sakura thought she was a capable kunoichi until she died in the Chuunin Exam. Now she's stuck in a loop, dying again and again while she struggles to understand her strange predicament. How hard can it be to pass one stupid test? Sakura/Naruto/Hinata thruple Chiaroscuro by boomvroomshroom They say the only thing to fear is fear itself. That, and a motivated Nara." Shikamaru is born with his father's intelligence and his mother's work ethic. The world is turned sideways. |
HeavenSpire12 chapter 3 . 7/13 Left on a cliffhanger |
Alchazar chapter 3 . 6/26 I hope you update |
Temsen chapter 3 . 5/28 Eesh. What a cliffhanger to leave on. :( Hope to see more of this! |
monkiepawn chapter 1 . 4/26 damn... you can't just leave a cliffhanger like that and leave us out of our minds here! I mean, some clan heads are out, the kage and other important figure as well. And we have an invasion of 2 armies and 4 Biju at the door. Great story, hope to see it update soon! |
Link0011 chapter 3 . 4/25 Hope to see more soon! |
Tachibana Kabuki chapter 3 . 3/10 There should be more stories like these |
Yifto chapter 3 . 2/4 ya done goofed lol. they about to get rekt |
D72 chapter 3 . 1/29 Here I was all warm and fuzzy with him doing his reach out and check on people and then nope, he's gonna have to fight and maybe even kill people he considers close friends. This fic is quite the trip, and I've loved every step. Like even if this is comedy, he's gonna have to like, Put B in traction, Get Onoki really high, Dodge advances from matatabi (And not yugito, she'd just be mortified the entire time) But yeah, no matter how fun it is, invasions are bad times. Sadly, it looks like the flames of youth may have burned out here. I'm putting the fic on favorite and alert, eagerly awaiting more! |
Shade chapter 3 . 12/27/2019 I like what you are doing with this and I am looking forward to seeing the next chapter and how it turns out. Good that your keeping ino in the pairing, as for the second one- have him end up with shion, hinata can flirt/kiss and make out with him from time to time but in the end he will definitely get with shion along with ino. |
Santan Suprah chapter 3 . 12/25/2019 PLEEEAAASEEEE UPDATW BRO, u cant blue ball me with a cliffhangar like that |
Lt Juan Rico chapter 3 . 12/22/2019 Just read this again as I really enjoy this fic. Hoping you're able to update soon |
minecraft93 chapter 3 . 12/18/2019 hope you update soon |