Love this story. Can't wait for more.

thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows

lol

You should be ashamed of yourself. Eight year old drug pushers is beyond the pale.

You have two kids being drug pushers? What kind of person are you?

Hermione has two moms? Elizabeth and Louise? Were both women pregnant at the same time? Why is there only one child if two women are pregnant?

I have some great ideas for the story:

You can have Harry Hermione and Luna, develop all there ideas to completion.

Harry Hermione and Luna, the two girls could have Harry as their husband.

You could show all three of them improving Both Worlds.

If you really want a constructive comment, I'll give it to you.

You keep making a mistake of, use of, His and hers.

When you talk about Harry, you usually use HER, the same for Hermione, except you use HIM.

The above comment is not to criticize at all, I'm just letting you know.

You might want to look at the chapters and see what I mean.

I love the story.

Poor Luna. Fabulous story

Harry and Hermione’s reasons for not trying to get the best grades they could get is asinine.

There is no justification for being a horrible person to innocent people who have never wronged you.

This isn’t an anti-hero story. This is just the author trying to justify what a horrible person they are irl, via fanfiction. The author is wrong. People like Harry and Hermione depicted in this story deserved to be neglected and abused because they are bad people.

Drug dealers are scum, regardless of what drug they sell. If you think marijuana, continuously bred to give the highest high, isn’t bad you are an idiot. Alcohol affects the liver over a long period of time. The liver is an organ that is designed to deal with things like alcohol. Marijuana rots the brain, which isn’t designed to deal with marijuana.

I honestly don’t care about marijuana. It’s more of how horrible the people are who sell illegal drugs. Harry’s inner monologue and thoughts on why he agrees to sell drugs is that of a horrible person. Your protagonist are bad people.

Why would you do that? Why make shitty protagonist? You came up with a lot of different ways for them to make money and didn’t need to add the drug dealing evil personality to do it. Harry’s rational for selling drugs is the rationale behind every evil sociopath or serial killer.

I was really enjoying this story until I read that. It’s the reason for my rant. It sucks enjoying a good story and characters until you find out they are horrible people.

Great story so far, maybe note key things so when you write the next chapter you know what has happened in the chapters before

I need a friend like them

They grow up so fast, but mistakes can't be forgotten that quickly, though their parental relationships are on the rocks, what's Harry's and Hermiones plans for the future?