| Reviews for The mini-adventures of the M10 and their Friends and enemies |
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   Halo20601 AKA MasterCheifMan chapter 13 . 7/16 Oh, so you're bringing the world of Avatar into the mix, interesting. Also, Toffee continues to be the best villain. |
| Halo20601 AKA MasterCheifMan chapter 12 . 5/27 The chapters that have more of Nemo or any of the Pirates are the most entertaining ones, in my opinon. I don't know if it's because of how you write them, but they're just great to read. |
| The Cowardly Christian chapter 12 . 5/26 Funny... But I agree with Hanson, Just eat the dang pig(waddles, not Pirate-with-gout I like him.) |
| The Cowardly Christian chapter 11 . 5/14 re-read Buledo's chapter, now I know what a jerk he is, that makes it all the m,ore satisfying! |
| Halo20601 AKA MasterCheifMan chapter 5 . 4/30 Cool fight scene, and it looks like things are about to get intense. |
| Halo20601 AKA MasterCheifMan chapter 3 . 4/29 So, this is the lead in the Mummy part of the story. |
| Halo20601 AKA MasterCheifMan chapter 2 . 4/29 Needed to re-read the first part for a refresher, but it looks like they are on the start of a long journey. |
| The Cowardly Christian chapter 10 . 4/27 Winston's death is one of my favorite scenes... Excellent fight scene as well!...but why did you put the entire last half of the chapter in italics? Thank you for not losing the books... Excellent Karma for Preston and buelodo...but who is buledo anyway? ...why didn't you have Pacifica and Dipper kiss at the end? You could'a had her joke with the camel, only for Dipper to sweep her up and do it? Sorry for not talking to you for awhile...probably won;t be talking for a while more, on top of my commissions, my pay just got cut at my job... |
| Halo20601 AKA MasterCheifMan chapter 9 . 4/17 Good chapter, I liked Pacifica here. |
| The Cowardly Christian chapter 9 . 3/31 I have to side with Sanson, you can't hold back in these kinds of situations. You go Pacifica! p.s. sorry I haven't responded, I have three other projects going on. p.p.s. How are you doing? |
| The Cowardly Christian chapter 7 . 3/16 You can't hire good help these days... You did good by Winston in this chapter, great job! I'll PM you later, I'm busy today... p.s. will our favorite homicidal, candy named, British aristocrat make an appearance next chapter? |
| The Cowardly Christian chapter 6 . 3/7 Now this might be my favorite chapter yet! You wove the multiple narratives/cannon's together so seamlessly here! Great job! |
| The Cowardly Christian chapter 5 . 3/2 Great chapter! One of my favorite scenes re-imagined with my favorite characters...sweet mercy I'm sleepy...talk later! |
| The Cowardly Christian chapter 4 . 2/18 Great chapter, teasing pacifica, preston falling, lion 'not eating rotten meat' joke. It's all good. Suggestion; have them want to read the book mainly as a way to resurrect Star...which wakes up Imhotep. Later, they decide they don't want to risk Star 'coming back wrong', and give it to the Medjay for safe-keeping instead. |
| Halo20601 AKA MasterCheifMan chapter 1 . 2/13 An interesting start. |
