Reviews for Defiers of Fate
Patriot-112 chapter 18 . 7/9
Well done Claire, and poor Rhaegar had to arrive at the sight of where Sam and his family were brutally murdered. One thing is for sure, Euron is gonna GET IT.
Time Parad0x chapter 10 . 6/9
GRMM himself said:

"There was one Dragon in recorded history brought down by a missile it was a once in a million shot - a mature Dragon in the air is virtually invulnerable"

Funny how Euron not only was able to sneak up on Winterfell where an army is camped he did so with scorpions which are mounted on large carriages he somehow managed to get through the snow close enough to Winterfell to shoot down dragons without anyone noticing. (like the Wargs, Bran etc)
An army (the Lannister/Golden company) who arent even used to fight in the snow - with the golden company probably never ever have seen snow to begin with ... against wildlings and Northmen ...

with Winterfell being one of the greatest fortresses in existence (not unlike Stormsend which defenses couldnt be overcome by an army of 50k people)... they somehow managed to capture Jon and Dany ...

Im speechless ... and I better stop reading this fic for my own good.
Time Parad0x chapter 9 . 6/9
Woah -
Bran here is even more worthless than in canon ...

Im always impressed on how hard authors have the good guys hold onto the idiot ball and how impressive the author fiat is just to give the enemies a fighting chance ... when confronted with Dragons.

An army crossing the whole kingdom from kings landing to Winterfell having to cross Moat Cailin and nobody knows about it not even Varys who somehow is able to get any information?
Without outriders, Dragons or them somehow being aware of their approach ... really fucking hard to believe.
Patriot-112 chapter 17 . 6/9
Nice to see that Jon has gotten his Dragon children at last. Of course, while they're there, they'll probably have unexpected guests, and quite possibly Bran going Night King on them all.
gemimi2222 chapter 15 . 4/23
Oh No Sam Died... I wonder if they'll spill the secret of who else they traveled with ? Please update soon.
Patriot-112 chapter 15 . 4/19
Well, we got the son of Brienne and Jamie, and the now late Jon Tarly...so then, who's the third.
MillieBelle chapter 14 . 4/12
You mean "Your graces."

In the Game of Thrones, people address the members of the royal family as "Your grace." I hope to see your update as soon as you can.
Patriot-112 chapter 14 . 4/11
Well done Claire. I'm surprised Jon and Dany didn't ask about the others, especially about Jaime and Brienne's son. And I still wonder who else they brought. Hope to see the next chapter soon!
keller.blair1 chapter 1 . 4/11
You should do a story of Jon as a proud knight
gemimi2222 chapter 13 . 3/23
Please update, I cant wait to hear the over due conversation between them. Also I like this Arya.
Carla E. Slaton chapter 13 . 3/18
This was an excellent chapter. Keep them coming.
Patriot-112 chapter 13 . 3/17
Little Jon is gone! T.T

And Brienne's boy is in the house!
Patriot-112 chapter 12 . 1/5
Well done. And soon, the final journey south.
StormNightSS chapter 12 . 1/5
Loved the reunion. All of what I though it would be and more.i shed a couple of tears, I'm not going to lie. Thanks for updating. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
ashenerden chapter 11 . 12/9/2019
I am sorry to say the writing quality has deteriorated towards the last chapters. There are too many errors for me to enjoy reading. You need a good beta reader in my opinion. If you are interested I can pm you a more detailed list of errors I have detected, but I will only write them down if you really want it. No need to waste time otherwise.
I like the story overall though, so thanks for a fun story.
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