This is what im looking for!
Keep it up, i waiting for the next chapters

Please update soon I cant wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter! Please update soon!

Please update! I cant wait to see what happens next!

Cool until you decided to tell them about animes and shit why so dumb I always hate when inserts do that it's fkin illogical and dumb

Too rushing, oc almost didn't have any supposed characters or required emotions for the event he's currently in, oc immediate ability to pilot a machine to high degree even though he hasn't any knowledge nor training to do the job, every interaction is bland and blatantly forced like seeing pre-programmed golem interact with one another.
It's quite good for a first though, can be worse.

Nice story.

i love it more pls

You grammar needs fixing

nice novel im looking forward to more of this

not too shabby. though, I do wonder if the Oc cant return then why not go native. also will there be an unexpected rival to counter the Oc? no doubt that would be interesting. looking forward to more. until then, later!

Feels like there is little to no change to the main plot of seed which one of the main problems she one chooses the archangel as a starting point so you need as your mc to try and change things up a bit maybe killing the masked guy and beating all the other Ms to the point of them surrendering cause you kinda made your mc a Gary stue cause of the ms

hope you update soon and why do people always try and side with the archangel in seed why

not too bad. I do wonder if the SI is not able to return then why not connect with one of the girls. most likely either Cagali or Murrue. those two were wasted on their canon pairings. though, I'm sure that the GN particles that will no doubt flood the ship again and again will hasten the development of the innovator talents of Mu and cause the SEED form to go further than ever predicted in the Destiny saga. looking forward to more. until then, later!

It's a good first chapter for this fic