thanks for this beautiful story

good work

That was totally awesome! I loved the new Harry! It was so cool! This is definitely a 2x ultimate favorite! It would be 3x if it was longer.

Very nice. You have talent.

I know the laws of anime, but becoming immortal is impossible. It defies the laws of space and time. Becoming an immortal being would destroy or corrupt space and time.

An example of corruption would be the basement under Urahara's shop in bleach. When time doesn't flow the same way everywhere you know time is corrupted.

Another example of corruption would be the ability of manipulating gravity, like the kilo kilo fruit in One Piece. If gravity isn't the same for everyone, or worse, isn't the same everywhere without a logical reason, space is corrupted.

Corruption leads to destruction.

If time is corrupted, it will be destroyed, but when?

If space is corrupted it will be destroyed, but how?

You know, my whole rant may seem weird to you, and to be honest, it seems weird to me too. When I write, I have no time to plan. I need to write what I have before it disappears.

complete and utter bull crap.

goog reading though!

erm..."sunlight" is the same as "starlight" technically...

hmm... and HP/HG then? oh well. other than that ,good stroy.

vf

Great story, I really like it.

please update soon!

this is also very good, i hope you do decide to extend this into a sequel but if youve lost interest in it maybe it would be better to focus on a new story perhaps? Either way i look forward to your next work(s)!

light is matter and energy there is no difference

everything that makes up our bodies and the elements come frome the core of long dead stars

so there is no limit to what one can theoretically achive through the power of light

and the storyline is ok but you seem to jump too much

YOU MADE HIM IMMORTAL!

love it keep up the great work