Reviews for The Overlord and the Demon King
EmperorCeph chapter 1 . 5/11
When do you plan on continuing this story? I really want to see Ainz's and Zi-O's interactions within the New World and if they will either Co-operate with eachother or not.
cody chapter 1 . 5/10
more chapters pleaes and long live kamen rider zi-o.
berrus-sama chapter 1 . 1/9
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Doctor Bisharp chapter 1 . 11/18/2019
Great so far please continue
Obsidian Nova Arc chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
wonder how this will turn out looks awesome
Blindfold Snake chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
Iwae, Atarashi sekai!
Devil-O-Angel chapter 1 . 9/19/2019
AMAZING!
are they and momonga/ainz going to find each other again?
maybe you can even get gazel to live!
The Black Ace.EXE chapter 1 . 9/16/2019
I am so LOVING THIS. I’m very excited to see more of this and I am so excited for the moment when Woz and Albedo meet up and start trying to decide which of their lords is better. It does make me wonder though if the NPCs of Ainz will respect Zi-O or not since he is human but is still one of Ainz best friends.
jmcdavid chapter 1 . 9/9/2019
Well...

So in this timeline, what started out as character designs for Yggdrasil Online, based on Kamen Riders, are going to become Kamen Riders Ohma Zi-O, Geiz, and Tsukuyomi. Also, White Woz and Black Woz will probably be more like brothers than anything else.
Driliviel 2 chapter 1 . 9/8/2019
You have my interest with this first chapter. I'll be waiting for more. Keep up the good work.
RegulusNeil chapter 1 . 8/31/2019
this is a good one I just finish watching Zi-O series a new concept want to see more you did a goo job
Lord Kougane chapter 1 . 8/30/2019
This have potential, now I'm not too familiar with Overlord (but i do read few fanfiction crossover with it). And I like the concept. (Some ordinary guy became overpowered character while forced to control his friend creation because they will likely destroy the world without any hesistation because they don't have moral like him and just as OP as him)

I have few suggestion to make Oma Advent different from Ainz own goal, just like previous reviewer said you should make the Oma Advent NPC loyality be very fickle or make them loyal to guild but have their own agenda and not afraid to question Zi-O leadership.

Like the evil alignned NPC like Evolt will applaud Sougo when he make evil decision but the good aligned NPC (since you imply not all npc are Dark Rider) they would question Sougo decision. Heck you could make some kind civil war situation between them.

Oh and maybe you could make Real Decade and Diend come to the new world too jus to spice thing up XD
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2019
Great chapter!
This... this is... VERY BRILLIANT STORY!
Felipe1402XZA chapter 1 . 8/30/2019
this great story
Red Mass chapter 1 . 8/30/2019
...Brilliant, simply brilliant...now this is the story I could get behind. Kamen rider had been a huge part of my childhood and seeing Kamen rider ZI-O with the AU vers. of the cast is simply brilliant.

I see a huge potential in this story and hope to see more of it. Hope Sougo doesn’t go power hungry as a result, but Geiz and Tsukuyomi will rein him incase he gets out of hand. Although I’m more worried about the Dark Riders as they are more likely out of hand if they are anything like their original selves, unlike the NPCs of Nazarick who are loyal.

Other than that, hope to see more from ya, Ja Ne!
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