Reviews for The Genbu Story
burbur chapter 50 . 3/24/2012
i cried alot
bur bur chapter 44 . 3/24/2012
i was crying reading the chapter
kazumi chapter 50 . 3/16/2009
granted that you made a wonderful story that just based on your imagination.

but you should know that uruki is a man, his powers is of wind that he can only use whenever he turns into a woman. and uruki and takiko are the main couple here.

tomite is in love with aira,

the other seishi is

urumiya: haagasu and tegu, they are twins that share one constellation. so the urumiya symbol was split into two

inami: is the only PURE girl seishi

hatsui: he is a 12 yr old boy who heals using herbs

Hikitsu: emutato kan. tomites best friend

namame: his symbol is at his chest. and he is born og holy stones. he is like a miniature creature made of rock. his character means wall

tomite: chamuka taan, well you know who he is.

uruki: crown prince of hokkan. he can turn into a woman whenever he uses his powers. he is the one takiko loves.

well thats all. though i like your genbu kaiden version better
Kutoja chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
Finnish:

adj.

Of or relating to Finland or its people, language, or culture.

n.

The Finno-Ugric language of the Finns.

Finish:

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1. To arrive at or attain the end of: finish a race.

2. To bring to an end; terminate: finished cleaning the room.

3. To consume all of; use up: finish a pie.

4. To bring to a desired or required state: finish a painting. See Synonyms at complete.

5. To give (wood, for example) a desired or particular surface texture.

6. To destroy; kill: finished the injured horse with a bullet.

7. To bring about the ruin of: The stock market crash finished many speculators.

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1. To come to an end; stop.

2. To reach the end of a task, course, or relationship.

n.

1. The final part; the conclusion: racers neck-and-neck at the finish.

2. The reason for one's ruin; downfall.

3. Something that completes, concludes, or perfects, especially:

a. The last treatment or coating of a surface: applied a shellac finish to the cabinet.

b. The surface texture produced by such a treatment or coating.

c. A material used in surfacing or finishing.

4. Completeness, refinement, or smoothness of execution; polish.

5. The flavor left in the mouth after wine has been swallowed.
Hikitsulover-818 chapter 24 . 9/26/2007
i agree with freezing takiko . i never did like miaka ... (sorry to all miaka fans )
DiAnnE chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
It was great! the translation was great, but i think you had it wrong there... it was rimudo not tomite who died causing takiko's weakening...
Alyssa chapter 50 . 4/23/2007
hi my name is alyssa. i just finished reading ur fy:genbu fan fic a couple days ago.i really like it but i have some ?s for u. the first one how long ago did u make this fic? i have more but i would like this one answered first. my email address is please email me ur answer.
autumn-leaf16 chapter 50 . 8/20/2006
Wow...this is an amazing story...it is amazing at what you managed to write despite the fact that genbu kaiden only got published lately. I mean...it is just a great story. It's really long but I actually couldn't stop because I want to find out about what happened. I really like this story although it is kind of weird after having read Genbu Kaiden lately, I mean...Hikitsu and Uruki...but leaving that aside, as you probably didn't know about what the author was planning, it is a great story. I really really enjoy reading it. Another factor that I really like about your story is that it have the right note. It does get humours but I really enjoy reading a serious fushigi yugi story.

I hope you write more Fushigi Yugi fan fiction!
Sakura Kitano chapter 50 . 4/17/2006
Oh. My. God.

That's all I can say about this. I've been watching Fushigi Yugi since I was little and I am currently reading Genbu Kaiden. I stumbled across this story on my search for info about Uruki and Takiko - and I'm glad I did. Very well done.
Alolynn chapter 50 . 2/19/2006
omg, im finally finished reading your story! I feel so proud, its kinda sad how addicted i can become to fanfiction... and i finished it in less than a day too...wow _;; That was a great ending to this awsome fan fic, and i look forward to any future works by you!
maan kamleh chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
finally a fushigi yugi fic that doesn't suck i like your work
hannah chapter 2 . 11/23/2005
really well done. congrats!
Summoner Lenne10 chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
OMG... 50... chapters... and so little reviews...

I'll read this, I need to, it's very interesting seeing people's ideas of how Genbu'd end up, and then you actually read Watase's version *Which I love even more than the original FY, Takiko's so... un annoying! If you didn't know Genbu is now being made into a manga*

So yep, must read this when I have time... I never have time... heh.
Princess Aerith chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
Wow, this story is really different than the orignal one, well at least the first chapter is. Do you happen to know the real storyline of Genbu? If you do please tell me, I've been looking everywhere for the storyline, but no luck. *has read first volume* Oh and if you do, please give me an answer through reviewing my fic, Doki Doki! Thanks

Aerith
happilyinsane13 chapter 13 . 8/12/2005
You told me of the chapter, but the site didn't alert me. and...I LOVE IT! My friend, your writing is superb! The way you planned it all out, the jealousy rising, the denile, the flirting! I did not see any real flaw. Man, your awesome! I wish I could write as good as you can! Email me soon my friend!

Blake
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