Reviews for Unsung Hero |
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ljmurdock86 chapter 2 . 7/11 make him join anti sakura |
Shade chapter 2 . 7/4 a very good chapter. I like everything done so far, from how Naruto is different and his relationship with Sakura and how the Naruto verse and fate verse combine into this. I think this type of crossover is the best because they blend in so naturally, yet with enough differences to tell that they are separate universes- and even those can be explained and worked with, like: Mana and chakra (mana is planet energy and chakra is inner energy- so just say how humans evolved differently and strengthening it through their breeding) Alignment to an element(s) and various abilities (e.g. necromancy, sensing magic or chakra, unique/powerful weapons, etc.) Demon's, summons, beasts and tailed beasts etc. (Are like the phantasm species) Magus and shinobi If you want to explain the power differences- the planet in fate universe is fighting against their magic, the planet in Naruto universe is not. And again evolution, etc. If a holy grail war/a servant is summoned in Naruto verse you 'could' have ninjas their equal (a servant with a physical prowess at E-rank is at least ten times a normal person in their universe but a shinobi is also physically above a person by many times) but you could also have a servants stats matching a shinobi's standard 10 or downplay/overstate one universe in comparison to the other to keep it more even. Anyway enough rambling on my part, it was a good chapter and I am looking forward to the next chapter, hope it comes soon. |
doomqwer chapter 2 . 6/13 glad to see this update i am really looking forward to what comes next as its nice to see naruto have someone he can trust and depend on in sakura even though is possessed by angra manyu |
Hashirama 1710 chapter 2 . 6/13 I'm happy this updated I really like seeing naruto and sakura (matou) together |
Thetrue13 chapter 2 . 6/12 congratulations, I'm at a loss for words to describe your talent. I ask you to update more often, I look forward to the next chapter. but really, congratulations left me speechless. |
Thetrue13 chapter 1 . 6/12 congratulations, I'm at a loss for words to describe your talent. I ask you to update more often, I look forward to the next chapter. but really, congratulations left me speechless. |
Thetrue13 chapter 1 . 6/12 congratulations, I'm at a loss for words to describe your talent. I ask you to update more often, I look forward to the next chapter. but really, congratulations left me speechless. |
Thetrue13 chapter 2 . 6/12 no words to describe his talent. congratulations, I ask you to try to update more often, but other than that, I can't say it wasn't worth it, really congratulations, you deserve it. |
CAD270895 chapter 2 . 6/12 more please |
CAD270895 chapter 1 . 12/10/2019 more please |
Mike chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 Please update this looks like it could be a great story. I like the hook here. |
figcube chapter 1 . 9/2/2019 This looks really promising. It doesn’t have Zel as a troll so its already cleared one of my peeves. Please don’t let a promising story fall by the wayside. |
Darck Master chapter 1 . 8/29/2019 Mmmm, It looks interesting |
SPark681 chapter 1 . 8/29/2019 Well, this outta be good wonder what's next anyways keep up the great work! |
xirons20 chapter 1 . 8/29/2019 -It looks interesting. -I just hope there is no drama with sakura remembering that annoying character that is shiro. |