Please update soon,I'm enjoying this

pretty good

I'm honestly impressed how you came up with the idea for using leveling floors to help Lincoln grind. But I was honestly hoping you'd stay with your original script and have Renee train Lincoln. Then come up with an idea for Lincoln to grind. Looking forward to what will happen next.

Still a good start.

Nice, I don’t see many authors use the item world system so I’m happy to see it here, I can’t wait to see more chapters. Also good luck with you’re med schooling! Thanks for the new chapter!

excellent work on this chapter and looking forward to seeing how Ronnie anne being her changes things

ill be completly honest in my review as thats what's needed, this story is good, the spelling the story itself its all good i just have a personal preference issue. this seems to be inspired by anime by which ones I'm not sure but in amime such as one piece HXH and jojos the powers and to more varying degrees world building are very well thought out and have a lot of room to grow. devil fruits and stand abilities can seem simple but grow over time. Lincoln's powers can grow that seems to be his main ability, but for Maggie and renee how do their powers keep from getting predictable or obsolete over time. As for world building the explanation for the abyss sounds a little convoluted, a more simple system could yield an even better story, like i said this is all personal preference so take it with a grain of salt. I wish you good luck on medical school and writing this strory i enjoyed this chapter a lot.

Interesting start. I like the aged up Lincoln, and having already started the game. Can't wait to see where you go with things and what happens with the girls. Anyway hope you continue things and hope life gives you time to write, I know how it can be with my own writing happening sporadically due to college.

Finally found time to read. You've made Lincoln 16, showed his parents, and showed that the program has a mind of its own. Can't wait to see what you do next.

Interesting start.

Who are the two girls Lincoln is seeing? Who are Lincoln's real parents? What's with his strange abilities? Which girl would end up falling for Lincoln? So many questions. Can't wait till the next chapter!

Pretty good. You really outdid yourself with this rewrite.

I don't know how people can still mistaken anime with cartoon,seriously they are totally different

i think i like this better than the last version, can't wait for the next chapter.

Good job with this chapter but I would heavily suggest a slightly slower pacing.