It was a very good fanfiction overall. I'm glad that you wrote the same chapter from the perspective of both Sun and Moon and that you went into detail about their appearances for prom night. Nice work :)

I loved seeing Sun's perspective in all of this! This flowed nicely, and I loved the found family feels, haha. You did a great job with this fic!

Even though it's short, this is such a sweet ending to a great story! I can't wait for the bonus chapter, I know it'll be good!

Only Sun would wear a bright orange tie XD I don't think I've ever seen one haha. Definitely reminds me of how awkward my pre-prom pictures were, and taking off heels is such an authentic prom experience in my eyes. I love the flow of the prom in this chapter, and I can't wait to read the next!

*excited to see the actual prom. Sorry, the review posted before I was done

Supportive friend Acerola is fantastic, and I'm so exc

Honestly Moon reminds me of myself when I went dress shopping. She'll find the perfect heels and have a great time lol, very food writing as usual! I love seeing Acerola in fics

Ewwwwww, boring story. Sorry but I defeated you. AshXMay rocks. My posts have all the information

I'm all for prom stories, and this is already shaping up to be a good one :3