i think it would've been more insteresting if solon's spell does not work. so sothis is still here.

Love the story so far! I just hope it doesn't lead to Kronya becoming evil again by the end...

I don't know about you but I thought the part with Leonie was the high point of the chapter.

Making all the time I’m stuck in lockdown a bit better with another great chapter. I gotta admit I totally forgot about Leonies relationship to byleth father and I think it was handled very well, as you make a good point about wanting kronya to simply get away with murder and kronya s ability to actual emphasize with someone who’s attacking her is actually pretty mature . Also really like what you did with Claude, hell, thought you made a pretty good C support with the two,( FE writers take notes) and using Hubert as an excuse was pretty brilliant on your part. Anyway TY for keeping this going, love the passion as always

You should definitely have Byleth recruit (at least) Bernadetta and Leonie.

It's nice to see Bernie being treated well.

This has to be my favrotie Three House's story yet, easily, no comparison.

I loved how Kronya is trying to make friends and bi d with people, it truly feels like she is a radically different person and I'm glad to see that she really isn't human, at least not entirely, it was a good touch having her blood turn out blue.

I think Leonie's fight was inevitable and justified and I could sense that, while Leonie wants to give her a chance if Byleth wanted to show mercy, she needed that vengeance, she needed that satisfaction. If anything it kinda feels like Leonie admires Byleth for displaying mercy despite his one pain and after she got her catharsis she is more than willing to be civil. It was short but to the point and you could feel the hate and pain Leonie needed to let out before she could move on.

I also loved the conversation between Bernadetta and Kronya, thought shirt I could certsinly tell they would be good friends, you got s chuckle out of me when Bernadetta referred to Kronya as a ghost, that is such a Bernadetta thing she would say.

For future chapters I would reccomend Byleth having a talk with Leonie about the importance of mercy and forgiveness, if he can forgive (in time) then she can forgive as well. Also, I would heavily reccomend that some students from other house's join Byleth and his class in the Holy Tomb.

One idea I had was that students that want to learn something underneath Byleth have special tutoring sessions that technically makes them a part of his class but the student in question is still a member of ehatever house their in.

For example, Bernadetta wanted to learn let's say sword play and magic and Byleth specialized in that, so she would take part in his class's from time to time to gain some knowledge or experience. Or heck, maybe Byleth outright asks some students that he is clsoe to if they would like to join him at the Holy Tomb, those that join him are "recruited" in a sense and will follow Byleth post time skip.

Keep,up the awesome work and thank you for the time and effort, I enjoy every uodate you give us.

A most excellent chapter! You did really good! I actually was caught by surprise when I read Leonie brawling (coughbeatingcough) Kronya down to the ground! Literally in fact at that! But I digress. Despite it catching me off guard, I thought it was well done. After all, redemption of a murder does NOT come easily; if ever. Regardless, at least Kronya didn’t take it the wrong way and even wished to make up for it. That’s good. It’s a sign of improvement in the redemption department. I must say that you fit in the conversation with Ingrid well too. Good on ya!

To complete this review, all I have to say is keep the good work up and see ya next chapter!

P.S. Omg. Gotta love Bernie eh? Lol.

I'll be honest I want to see more interaction between Leonie and Kronya because I can see them becoming comrades down the line and the more they fight and interact the more they learn to trust each other.

I said it before, and I’ll say it again love the way to you get in the head of the characters. I also liked how much we see Byleth as a person, like actually making jokes, guiding his students to be better people, it’s a cool side to see from him, given we never really see it in the game. Also if life’s in the way don’t rush, as I’ll gladly wait for you to create another work of art on your time!

P.S laughed twice in this chapter once where Kronya defends her outfit and where Felix try’s to give a compliment. Yeah that’s exactly what Felix would say

You my good sir, are a friend of the people! Another amazing chapter!

That conversation between Seteth and Rhea left me wondering just how much he knew of her plans.

ITS BACK! I thought this was gone!

Well then, let's get to it. So Kronya's new life begins, I do feel she should've a
apologized to Rhea and Seteth personally, like she couldve thanked them for their mercy and honestly say she was sorry. Apologies can be quite powerful, especially considering that I've noticed that Kronya's personality is starting to change, she is more meek, slightly timid and even aware of her outfit to the public.

Her apolgizing and thanking Byleth again for saving her coukdve been genuine. Like she feels like a new woman, she feels free and ready to forge her new path.

I also think the introduction to her new classmates was pretty good, the subtlety in her behavior is very effective. Her old personality is dying while he true self is finally showing, I think it was a good idea to have her show tears like that. It showed Dimitri and his fellow Lion's that Kronya is a literal different person, she dosent even come close to feeling like the assassin she was.

I do wish though you didn't change her outfit, seriously I think it's too funny for the boys in the Academy to be distracted of what Kronya is wearing but then again it does make sense that the school has modesty. Not to mention Kronya is trying to change for the better and giving herself a new identity is a good move on her end.

That being said, please don't change her skin color and make up, at least keep that, that's half of what makes her so attractive in the first place. I think her outfit should return only for battle and the post time skip (or in...other situations).

Also, I like that you gave Kronya's outfit a reason and it's a very good reason. If I recall correctly, her outfit and style of distraction is based on Kunoichi's, female ninja's that use their assets to distract their opponent's. I do feel thought that Byleth couldve said she looked very pretty in it regardless.

All and all, I enjoyed the return of this story, thank you very much.

To quote Rhea: Oh I adore this

You capture the characters with established personalities so well, the personalities you gave to Byleth, and Kronya are great, the bit with Kronya trying to justify her outfit legitimately made me chuckle, and I'd like to make a special mention for how you write Rhea, kind, and caring, but not without her intimidation factor.

Good work! Missed this story! Glad to see you back and about here and there! Lol. Also, I must say that when you mentioned your "slumbering", you really reminded me of Sothis there for a minute! Hah hah!

See ya next update!