Reviews for Blurred Lines
pianogirl1 chapter 64 . 7/26
What did Olivia give Fitz for their anniversary? It was hinted. Great job on this chapter. Can't wait for more.
jennkyle chapter 64 . 7/23
I just loved it I do
Olivia Delgado chapter 64 . 7/22
thank you
CharlieTsAngel chapter 64 . 7/22
Hey Lady, Thank you so much for a new Chapter. I am so looking forward to reading this so I can find out what Stephen’s butt is up to regarding the TV Show he’s designed for Olivia without her or Abby knowing of his involvement… Poor Abby and her insecurities is going to get her in a world of trouble… So let me get comfortable so I can find out what transpire and hopefully get some answers to some of my questions… Thanks again….

So it’s Olitz’s Anniversary and Fitz wants to do something special…. Congratulations to my favorite couple…. I guess he’s all healed up from his injuries after returning home from the hospital….

So Tracey’s azz got her wish. She told Fitz about their child dying shortly after birth and she never told him. But 17 years later she thought it was the appropriate thing to do while he was in the hospital for a head injury due to a freak jogging accident… Really Tracey, I guess you can rest assure you’ve got your wish now. Since you can’t have him, you’re making sure Olivia’s life with him is not all peaches and cream… Just like Olivia said, Tracey may not have him, but she’s in his head with what she told him about their deceased son, now he’s begun to drink more…. And Olivia wants to give him space to grieve the loss of a child he never knew existed until a few weeks ago… So is this all Tracey wants from him… She knows he’s not leaving Olivia for her. He’s made that perfectly clear that he loves his wife, Olivia.. Tracey heard him, but did she really hear him… Will she leave or stick around hoping to change his mind…. This is what I need to find out… so let me continue to read…

Awwww, he takes her back to St. Lucia where they got married… How sweet…..

Ok Fitz, enough is a freakin’ enough….. Tracey told you that ish so she could mess with your head. You are married with twin girls. I truly understand that you can’t tell someone how long to grieve. But Tracey waited 17 freakin years to tell you. What could you have done? She could have gotten a message to you if she tried hard enough… She doesn’t want to see you happy because she isn’t. And you’re not with her… Misery loves company… She wants your company, she wants you to comfort her so y’all can grieve together… Olivia loves you, but I’m not sure how long she’s going to put up with this ish… And you’re opening the door for Stephen to walk right in… Olivia is a trained certified Therapist. If you can’t talk to your wife, then you need to go see someone who can help you… There was nothing you could do then and nothing you can do now… Unless you want to go to Tracey, find his grave site and go visit it. Plus, why didn’t she have a photo to show you” Hmmmm, now that’s a darn good question…

Ok Olivia…. enough with the “what if’s” Fitz came and got you. He loved you… I guess he didn’t love Tracey enough to check on her back then. Maybe that’s a question he needs to ask himself… Did he love her enough to make sure she was ok after their break up?

Exactly Fitz, that’s exactly what you need to do. Go to his grave site and say your good-bye. Get some closure. And I’m sure Olivia will be right by your side…. Just like she is now… She told you she wasn’t going anywhere…. She loves you and wants to help you want you need to do to get through this…. Because drinking isn’t helping at all…. Only making it worst.

Right Olivia, he needs to have Huck do some digging to make sure the child was his after 17 years… Wow, I can’t wait to find out the outcome of this task…

Now that’s the Fitz I know…. Yaaaassss, y’all are going to enjoy your Anniversary by christening every hard surface in that house…. And no time like the present… Right Fitz…

Great Olivia… I like your terms to do the show… If the Silent Partner can’t step forward then there’s no deal…. Abby is so naïve and hungry to do the TV Show that she’s not looking at the big picture…. And now her azz is sleeping with Stephen, cheating on David… Won’t her azz be surprised when she realizes who the “Silent Partner” really is… Plus she’s broken the “Girl Code with Olivia by sleeping with Stephen… He’s in love with Olivia….. I sure hopes he doesn’t call out her name when y’all are doing to deed or in his sleep…. Lol

That’s right Abby, that’s what happens when you come out of a controlling relationship or marriage…. You learn how to look out for yourself on your terms… and now that she has a husband that loves her and children she loves and adores, she’s not letting him one pull her purse strings any more or walk around like someone’s puppet….

Why the question to Olivia Abby? Is there something you are regretting now …. Like sleeping with Stephen while you’re still involved with David… Oooo and betraying your best friend with a man who’s she’s been involved with before. And he’s only using you to get info on her and her life with her husband hoping he can interrupt that union,,, So what happened to the “Sister Code” Abby?

I hope Olivia tells Abby that as of New Year’s Eve Stephen had hopes of them getting together. But she made it clear to him that she loves her husband and is not leaving him… His time has passed years ago…David now that he’s coming home? I guess he was the furthest thing from your mind before, uhn?

Ok, Stephen, what’s your next game plan now that Olivia wants to meet with the “Silent Partner” who happens to be you? That’s what Abby is there for right, to keep you updated on Olivia without either’s knowledge…. So how do you plan to work your way out of this one… Get someone to pretend to be the Silent Partner so you can remain hidden? Well, I guess you better come up with something fast Stephen, looks like Mr. Friedman isn’t too happy with you at the moment….

Fitz, you know you are a “Smooth Operator”…. “Is there any room for me in that dress?” (Hollering)… I thought you wanted to be on time….. Don’t start anything you don’t have time to finish at the moment… (LMBO)

I’m glad Louis can’t see what’s going on in the backseat since he was told to take the scenic route to the restaurant…. I hope he can’t hear anything either….. (Hollering)

That’s right Olivia, two can play that game…. He wants you to beg, let’s see who’s begging now….. LMBO!

Fitz….. I’m hollering… SMH….. Olivia, I’m sure Louis has already relieved himself while he was driving….. I’m hollering….. Or he will once he drops y’all off at the restaurant so he can watch or listen to some porn…. Hollering! I’m rolling…. Fitz is hilarious…

Ooooo ish, I freakin’ forgot about Tracey’s trifling azz….
Tracey, let hope you Mr. is out there….. I’m not going to say your “Fitz”, because there’s not another Fitz out there. The mold has been broken and he’s married to Olivia… I will say there is someone out there for you… And when you find him, do not compare him to Fitzgerald Thomas Grant, the Third. Let him be the man he is… Get to know that man… Too often we want to mold and shape someone into our fantasy instead allowing the person to be themselves and seeing them for whoever they are, good or bad…. Good luck Tracey, let the baggage go completely…. Don’t put it down only to pick it back up… Fitz will never be yours… Move on…

Fitz, I loved your Anniversary speech to Olivia…. And the gifts were exceptional…. Now it’s just that time to do what y’all do…. Love each other’s bodies…. We know you love each other….

Next song up on the playlist is Quincy Jones’ “Secret Garden:

Tell me your secret
I don't just want to know
About any secret of yours
I wanna know about
One special secret (oh)
Because tonight I want you
To learn all about the
Secrets in your garden
I wanna read your mind
Know your deepest feelings
I wanna make it right for you
Baby, show me, let me
Share the mystery, ohh
Come on, come on
Come on, come on
Listen to your heart tonight
Come on, come on
Come on, make it alright, yeah
Come on, come on tonight
I know a melody
We can sing together
I've got the secret key
To you, baby
Let's make music
Harmonize in ectasy
Come on, come on
Come on, come on
Come on and sing it to me
Here in the garden where
Temptations feel so right

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HAPPY ANNIVERSARY OLIVIA AND FITZ

Ciao,
Ms. Lady C.
Lightning22speed chapter 64 . 7/21
Oh fantastic
kmack348 chapter 64 . 7/21
Ooops I forgot that also Abby needs to get it together lol! And I'm curious to see what Stephen's next play is. XO!
kmack348 chapter 64 . 7/21
I can't even put into words how excited I get when I see you've updated one of your stories. They are just pure MAGIC! I love that they were able to talk through some stuff at the beach because communication is key. Curious to see what if anything Huck will uncover on Tracey. Fitz's speech when he knelt down at the restaurant was beautiful along with all the thought that went into her ring. I loved it. The last line of his speech "If you ever leave me, will you take me with you?" I think is one of the most love filled lines I've ever read. and I read aaaaaaa lot. Sexy time was definitely gettin' it too, that was bomb AF. Very curious to see what you have in store for them next. Thank you so very much!
kelleekellkell chapter 64 . 7/21
Lovely anniversary trip and gifts!
I hope Tracey gets on with her life. Abby is in deep now, and Stephen is a wild card. Can’t wait for more.
noro chapter 64 . 7/21
Excellent writing can't wait to read more wonderful story
Tamarral chapter 64 . 7/20
This update was the huck kill strphrn and Tracey
Dendardendan chapter 64 . 7/20
This was so HOT! I love their love and the song choice is one of my favorites...

I hope both Abby & Stephen burns...
sister1256 chapter 64 . 7/20
Oh wow! Amazing chapter! Happy Anniversary Olitz!
Guest Lyn chapter 63 . 7/15
Quinn is Olivia 's real friend. Abby is out for herself, afraid or too lazy to put in the hard work to be successful on her own.
Shon chapter 63 . 7/15
I am tired of this Tracy can we please move on from her Damn
ThalitaFerreira0704 chapter 63 . 7/16
Trayce saia do caminho.
Abby por favor!
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