Reviews for Rise of the Death
thegrison chapter 8 . 8/5
You really need to work on your scaling of power. Fishface is a 1 of the Mist Swordsman. He is a S rank missing nin. He is faster, stronger and much better than lwa kage granddaughter. Who is maybe a jonin and at best A rank nin. Yet Naruto could cut fishface but not her? What?! You need to work on stuff like that before hand.
Guiltyofmycrimess chapter 10 . 8/3
YES
OG2tone chapter 14 . 7/27
bro you have to continue this PLEASE it was very awesome, please continue I love your stories.
1995hzq chapter 14 . 7/2
Hope to see Minato and Jiraiya's big exposure next chapter.
Mathias gabriel dracula chapter 14 . 7/3
Let his vengeance be without mercy
Skull Flame chapter 14 . 7/3
- So it begins now, huh? Well, they know they have Konoha to blame now.
- Kumada/Akuma's confrontation with Konoha is going to be a riot.
SageMask4 chapter 14 . 7/2
Let his vengeance be without mercy
Rebmul chapter 14 . 7/2
where is kushina in all this and her daughter cause i kinda think they would be on kumada's side after how they wanted to get back on naruto's good side and minato pulled this
PinkiePieParty122894 chapter 14 . 7/2
Love the new chapter and can’t wait for Konoha’s demise
Arraia chapter 14 . 7/2
Perfect and update soon please
Animaman chapter 14 . 7/2
Well, things definitely got darker for the Elemental Nations, and pretty sure Konoha is going to have a lot to answer for. In some ways, I wouldn't be surprised if Minato doesn't end up getting called out on some of his lies to where even Kakashi feels hurt over the fact that that his own sensei was using a prophecy to hurt his own son.

Pretty sure I'm not the only one hoping to hear that by the next chapter, when word spreads about what Konoha shinobi have done to Onoki's family, that both Minato and Jiraiya both have to start paying the price for their transgressions. One of them being Kushina, Yumi, and definitely Tsunade, decide to cut all ties from them, after reminding them that it was their lies that lead to this war. And if the two were to try and justify everything, both Kushina and Tsunade calls them out on their bull, especially calling them out on the real reason they didn't want Naruto to be a shinobi, because they thought Yumi was the Child of Prophecy, yet didn't want to own up to any of their mistakes.

Although with Kushina, hoping you reveal if she is still loyal to Minato to a fault, that she ends up having to crash and burn so badly, that she starts to wake up to the reality of things. To where at some point, either she or Yumi decide that it's about time to tell the truth around the village. From how Naruto was never a threat to the village, to how a prophecy was the reason behind everything. Mainly have the village implode on itself to where not even the Elders can do anything to stop the mass panic going on.
Uncharted22 chapter 13 . 7/2
Well, if you were so tired of it always about Naruto, you should just start the story off with an OC. Like Naruto dying when he was born, being killed by the Kyuubi and because of that, they seal it in your OC Kumada and adopted him. It would have made an even more believable reason for all the hate and neglect. The Village believes he the Kyuubi reborn who killed the Yondaime true son, his 'sister' believes he killed her real brother and Minato, Kushina, Tsunade and Jiraiya hate for the Kyuubi override their better judgment and can't help but blame him.
demon87 chapter 14 . 7/2
super
dingo-822 chapter 14 . 7/2
Is there any chance of having Kumada bring Naruto back using Summoning: Impure World Reincarnation so that he can kill what Minato and Jiraiya love the most.
sayans71 chapter 14 . 7/2
really nice
283 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »