| Reviews for A Light in the Dark |
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AnnaRavenRickman chapter 11 . 7/29 I really can't wait to read the next chapters.. I really like this story.. |
EmmaRandomAs chapter 11 . 6/12 Awesome story! Looking forward to reading more |
Busymom75 chapter 11 . 12/28/2019 This chapter was brilliantly written. I love this story |
LaViolaViolaRosa chapter 11 . 12/27/2019 This is an amazing story. |
lacey.owens.50 chapter 11 . 12/27/2019 This was a nice well rounded chapter. The camaraderie between Severus and Minerva is amusing to read. Damn Reta better not complicate matters. And yes, Severus is on route to being the one person he thought that he wouldn’t be :) . Plus he definitely understands her, heck they share similarities demonstrated by how they don’t like people. He’ll definitely be a great guardian for Haley. |
blucougar57 chapter 11 . 12/27/2019 Love the way this chapter wrapped up. Very haunting story, and so very much worth the wait. |
00Dark-Pheonix00 chapter 11 . 12/26/2019 This river than me. I am legally blind and how you were able to get into her mind was amazing. I’m not quite sure if you were also legally blind or visually impaired or fully blind. Her story really got to me because I saw some aspects of my own issues that I’ve had to deal with. Please write soon! |
Lady Sloane chapter 11 . 12/26/2019 Poor Haley! I've read the entirety of what you've posted so far in one go, and it's absolutely amazing! Not to mention, really heartbreaking and a real tear-jerker. :D I'm seeing so many parallels between Harry and Haley. Being orphaned, sent to relatives, abused. Harry does seem to be dealing with things much better than Haley though. Snape... I have a bit of a soft spot for redeeming Snape as well and I especially like how you've managed to make him not too OOC. You really bring out his soft and caring side so nicely. A question: If Lucius was sent to Azkaban, then wouldn't that change Draco? If so, are we going to see more of him? I hope you update soon! |
Thespianpoet chapter 6 . 12/26/2019 So much angst. So good though. |
DS2010 chapter 11 . 12/26/2019 Glad Severus is becoming her guardian |
Guest chapter 11 . 12/26/2019 Damn Rita Skeeter! I hope that she doesn’t ruin things further. I am excited that Severus is going to be her guardian. |
kittysundae chapter 10 . 12/7/2019 This story is incredible, it really makes you think about how inaccessible hogwarts is. |
lacey.owens.50 chapter 10 . 11/22/2019 Have made it to the last posted chapter :) Reading what Haley’s had to go through was so heart breaking, it’s a relief to know that she’ll never have to go back to her relatives ever again. Snape does care, he cares a lot. He’d have to be out of his mind not to seriously consider being her guardian. Reading Albus reaffirming this will be amusing for me to read if you do choose to write their conversation about it. Although I suppose Amelia could be the magical guardian too. It’ll also be interested to see how Draco deals with his part in Haley’s life, especially given the role his father has played in making her the way that she is. |
lacey.owens.50 chapter 4 . 11/18/2019 Hi, just started reading this today up to this point in the story. I like Snape in this, striving for equal opportunity and not mollycoddling. I’m definitely going to continue reading this, I’m interested to read an interpretation of how a blind student is accommodated at Hogwarts especially where the student isn’t a super powerful child. I’m blind too so this is a pretty nice story to read :) |
Busymom75 chapter 10 . 11/16/2019 I'm wiping tears away as I type this. That chapter was so much more intense than I imagined when we discussed it a while ago. Brilliant! |