I loved it! Thank you!

this was a good story. i wish it hadn't ended here, even if it was meant to be a one-parter. i hate whhen people read my one parte We Belong Together and say update soon when it says "one-parter". this really could be developed into a great story if you wanted to do that. and i'm glad that they kissed at the end, but i'm still wondering what book he brought... maybe oliver twist? keep writing.

Your an amazing writer. I love how many of your stories go in some what of a circle.

So, uh, could you write more? Pretty please? I want to know what happens! Please?

The way you mix their history in is ...wow! It's so natrual! And I really liked the ending and that I never could tell how it would end and the fairytale-thing.

wow you are just an amazing writer. I loved so very much Your a wonderful writer who takes these characters to a creative place all your own, and different from others. Incase no one has ever told you (but i'm sure many have) Your a writing genius.

hey, i really lvoed this sotry, is there more to come? if there is, i'd love to read it.

Yayy a happy end...or something like that anyway. I'm really happy you didn't let this thing end sad, cause I've already read and reviewed another one-parter (Secondhand Smoke) which was kinda sad and I was almost getting depressed :P but in a good way...:) I really like this story too...I wish I could write as good as you do...also...please update your story "Over Time" cause I'm really looking forward to seeing a new chapter!

I like the fairy tale motif. You blend it in nicely

GREAT! Although it's too bad you didn't continue. Well, what the heck? It's still great!

Oh, that was great. "*That* boy!"

I like this... it's a different approach to the literati relationship... makes me wonder, that if this did happen, would the whole California thing been as likely? (Well, yes, because of the writers, but the actual writers of theshow don't exist in FanFiction land, now do they?)

I'd really like to see you follow this up, see how Rory deals with this. I'm just dying for some literati fluff, but it's a really good idea. Great job.

NO!

You must be joking that you arent finishing this.

It's so good!

Go Literati-ness!

-grin-

I absolutely LOVE your way of writing! It's so great. I'm jealous. Kinda. Ok, you have to write more for us poor not-as-good-writers -cough-me-cough-, so we dont go insane. Heh.

Great job!

My, my ... this was magical.

That was amazing, beautiful, really I hope that you add more!

I liked this story very much. It was very firmly in Rory’s head, and she was real in a way she isn’t in most fanfics. I especially loved her bleak assessment of romantic inertia. Very true, and well done.