Reviews for The Seven Sisters
A little fart chapter 9 . 9/14
What is the level of strenght from Nazarick compared to my hero academia ? Does they have taken something from the new world ( like martial arts and wild magic ) or are more than level 100 now ? Or does they have bring citizen from there ? And what is the goal of Ainz ? Does the Guardian have learned new trick or have more experience to deal with situation ? And what od the quirks, what Ainz will do with them ?

Oh and my favorite Guardian is Albedo, hope that she will appear.
A little fart chapter 9 . 9/13
I was wondering if the pleiades will infiltrate UA or other organisation,. Wonder if Solution can hide other Nazaric NPC in her body for this purpose ( she say she can safety take 3 person without indering herself ).

Good luck for the next part
Ar.Fan chapter 9 . 9/9
how long wait new chapter?
Guest chapter 9 . 9/2
I like your story so far for as a My Hero Academia fanfiction, but I'm not getting alot of vibes from Overlord. Add some elements from Overlord and don't be afraid of writing that rated MA horror from Overlord just because it takes place in My Hero Academia.
Lord Metallex chapter 9 . 9/3
I really hope that people like All For One are at least on equal power to the gaurdians.
Ar.Fan chapter 9 . 8/30
nice story! cant wait continue.
Mr.Almond Brown chapter 2 . 8/22
Hopefully, Albedo and Demiurge isn't introduce first in the story. No offence but their disdain for humankind is a bit. . . Annoying.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/19
I would like to see shalltear, aura, or mare. Anyways this is an amazing story! I am really enjoying it!
Guest chapter 9 . 8/19
Fun question!
Which of the 41 Supreme Beings revealed so far is your favorite?
Guest chapter 9 . 8/14
Hi again, I'm the person who posted the review to share some criticism about your story. I want to take back my criticism on why you are only using the police force with only guns in your story.

I forgot that My Hero Academia has a extremely strict quirk society. ONLY licensed Pro Heroes are allowed to use quirks, not even the police force are allowed to use their quirks freely regardless of the circumstances. So after rereading the hostage scene again, I think you made the right approach. Shizu is a loophole to the quirks laws because she is only using her marksmanship and martial arts skills against the criminals, so it does not violate any quirk laws.

On the side note, i think the police force should put more effort on hiding Shizu's identity and appearance from the public since she still looks like a minor.

Thank you for your time, and stay safe.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/9
I like the concept of using only the Pleiades in your story, but I do have a few criticisms for you.

The story 's progression is slow. MHA fans wants to read the Pleiades interact with everyone favorite heroes or villains. The moments with Shizu and All-Might are adorable, but the readers wants more attention for others characters. Overlord fans want more attention on Nazarick, or at the least, more attention for the other Pleiades.

My Hero Academia is full with super heroes and super villains with countless unique quirks, but you are only using the police force with guns. Shizu should have worked with some heros or police forces with quirks in hostage scene, and Shizu still hasn't seen All-Might in action. If the Pleiades see what All-Might is capable of in terms of raw power, the Pleiades, the Floor Guardians, and Ainz will see potential in Nazarick's investment in MHA.

Sorry If I sound rude, but I see potential in your story. And I know the that pandemic isn't making it easy for you, so I wish you the best of luck for 2020.
RyuujiVantek chapter 9 . 8/10
Hope we see ainz soon.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/7
I know you said you're not going to ship anyone in your story, but I am hoping you could have Shizu carrying Deku in a bridal carry whenever he hurts himself. Everyone will assume they are dating, much to Deku's embarrassment, but Shizu is really just being a good friend to All-Might's pupil.

I also can't wait for Shizu to meet her new principal at U.A. high school, the U.A teachers are going need All-Might's strength to release Nezu from Shizu's bone crushing hugs.
danlyra chapter 9 . 8/9
good story at start ,but now .. kinda boring
FanficThinker chapter 9 . 8/9
Is there anyone in Boku no hero academia franchise that could be enough of a threat for Ainz? Because I can see him using grasp heart in anyone because they dont have resistance hos oh! so deadly death spells
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