Oooh, this is delightful! Beautifully written & I love all the characterizations, can't wait to see where it goes!

What an intriguing novel plot, of toby's work getting him to want a goblin. Hope we get to see more of toby's work side because i curious to see how that plays out as well as his work peoples asking about how he was able to retain a goblin.

SO GOOD! Jareth is perfect. His manerisms, speech patterns, and traps. Now, THAT'S the Goblin King. Well done. Well done. I can't wait to read more.

Devious Jareth! I do wonder about Tobey being dropped on his head, given his less than stellar decisions in this situation. Poor Sarah. Caught in the middle, stuck with an alluring, magical being as a roomie.

Great writing. Great original idea.

Very intreguing beginning. Did I laugh at the last line.
Toby doesn't know half the trouble he's asking for.

Very innovative. Really interesting start. Thanks.