| Reviews for Mending the Missing Pieces |
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Bluest Witch chapter 9 . 4/30 I always find writing Ron’s POV very difficult (albeit it’s worth it), I love how you’ve done it! Hope you’re ok, stay safe! |
Bluest Witch chapter 8 . 3/25 Amidst all the bad news, this felt like a blessing. Thank you soooo much! |
LillyMay77 chapter 7 . 2/17 Yay, Great chapter! Update again soon! |
Bluest Witch chapter 7 . 2/16 Glad to hear you’ve found the path for your story! And let me say that I liked the Ron and Hermione argument a lot. Ron has matured and it shows. Well done! |
closetcannons chapter 6 . 11/12/2019 As always, soo good and so we'll written! It feels so in cannon. Cannot wait for the next chapter :) |
Bluest Witch chapter 6 . 11/10/2019 I find very interesting your insight into Hermione’s mind. I think you’ve grasped the complex state she must be after a battle-trying to be strong, yet at the same time it’s like the world is crumbling down around her. Keep up the good work, you’re doing this nicely. |
Bluest Witch chapter 5 . 10/16/2019 I’ve liked the funeral. I’ve read a lot of them, with a wide range of different inputs, but there’s really no way to know how should it have been. So your take is as valid as anyone’s. I loved Kingsley acting as officiant: it really suits him, and it’s my own headcanon. The best part of the chapter for me is the end... both of them in bed just sleeping. How sweet yet powerful. And thanks for the mention! |
mellyfan chapter 5 . 10/15/2019 Good chapter - I love how people handle the problem of bellatrixs wand. |
closetcannons chapter 4 . 10/7/2019 Love it! You write each person so in character. Keep up the good work! I know it can be a lot of pressure to get the big milestone events right. It can be so good in your head, but so hard to put on paper! Cant wait for the next chapter! :) |
AzureAlquimista chapter 4 . 10/5/2019 Wow... Wonderfully written... Sweet. Sad. Intense. Funny some times. Really, a wonderful work. |
Bluest Witch chapter 4 . 10/4/2019 Hi! Do not apologise for irregular activity. The main objective of writing fanfics is to enjoy it. The way I see it, you must be your first fan, reader, reviewer and critic. This is not a paid work, so simply do your best! I’m interested in reading how this story develops, but I’m not in a hurry. See you in two weeks, a month or a year time! |
closetcannons chapter 3 . 9/19/2019 I can tell you put a lot of thought and detail into writing this and painting this vivid picture of how their home was effected after the war. Amazing job as usual :) and love the relationship development between all the characters. I cannot wait for the next chapter! |
LillyMay77 chapter 3 . 9/18/2019 I’m really enjoying the story so far! Excited for more, update soon! |
Bluest Witch chapter 3 . 9/18/2019 I loved this chapter, and I’ve read quite a lot of returns to the Burrow. You managed to reflect the mixed feelings they would get and they made sense. Nice work! |
LillyMay77 chapter 2 . 9/18/2019 Fantastic chapter! Love it! Please update very soon! |