I like it so far

I like this so far and it's very cool you did a good job and your writing style is clean.

I really enjoyed this story so far! It's been a real page-turner since the first chapter. It seems like you have a lot of knowledge about Doctor Who. The dialogue is realistic, the suspense is well-written and engaging, and it's very readable compared to other stories I've read recently. I'm curious to know what happened to The Doctor.

A nice camping trip turns into something sinister and dangerous. I really liked the interaction between Tom and Jane. They seem like good people and that makes it all the more tragic when the danger befalls them.

I think the story is very good so far, it's captivating. I'm very much intrigued and curious about what may happen next. Although, I'd love to see a bit more of Ten/Rose interaction, a bit fluff maybe? Well done!

Awesome!

Alright, I'm convinced now: Peter Argent is NOT human. I just can't find another explanation for his clearly supernatural senses and body (dropping from that height without dying) and talking specifically about protecting humans is sudpicious too.

Unless he got those abilities in a scuffle with aliens, that is. Or through illegal experimenting...on him or an alien. Or both.

Does he truly not know his real biological parents? Why is he so hostile towards the Doctor? He clearly seems afraid of being found out- did he do something wrong that would make the Doctor want to stop him? Or he's part of a species that clashed with the Doctor before and he's afraid if tge Doctod finds out, he'll have to leave or something? He isn't a Time Lord though, isn't he? Is he truly Peter Argent or was there an exchange at some point while he was alone, with the real Peter dead or in danger?

If he is the real Peter, does Stefan know his friend is an alien? Maybe Peter is afraid of being found out because he doesn't believe that he will be accepted? Though Stefan doesn't seem against aliens?

Or, the exchange happened and "Peter" took on the real Peter's identity long before, trying to make up for something? A bit like the gangers in "The Flesh", where the father died and his ganger took over raising "their" son. Come to think of it, the did say in that episode that he'd met gangers before, didn't he?

Quite the intriguing mystery...can't wait to find out more!

Thanks for the chapter!

Awesome, I love this!

At first, I thought it would be a crossover with the tv series Primeval. Took a bit to realise it wasn't.

Well. They're in quite the pickle now.

That creature seems downright nasty. I am surprised though that Peter Argent reacted to the sonic the way he did... is he truly human? He also reccovered pretty fast...is it possible that he's one of the creatures and the real Argent is dead? (Why he bohers to save Rose though I have no idea, if he is indeed one of the aliens).

I think they'll all end up being happy the Doctor is with them.

Looking forward to the next chapter!~ Sel

I think it's written in a similar way to the actual Who books and the story seems interesting so far. I look forward to the next update. Keep up the good work!

This is definitely a very intriguing idea. The writing is very good and the story so far reads just like an episode. The Doctor and Rose are both perfectly in character, particularly the Doctor and his meddling ways. I’m thoroughly enjoying the feel of this and I hope you continue on with the same tense atmosphere. It makes it all the more exciting. Looking forward to reading more! Thanks for sharing this!