Woahhh this is so good I literally can't wait to see what happens, my imagination is going crazy. Update soon please!

This was cool. You really did the moral debate thing, and brought in the student's and teacher's perspective. I can see how this chapter just toppled out, but I think it was a good one. I look forward to seeing how the perspectives of the other students might change, and where this is being taken.

I would like to point out that going into the characters thoughts so frequently may take a lot of depth out of the storytelling, especially when you can use the show dont tell method by conveying a message through how the character reacts instead of just telling them by showing their thoughts. Having a show dont tell system in play may also get the readers more invested in the storytelling by having them imagine what the character may be thinking and they would feel satisfaction when it may be true, or even have more investment when they are incorrect, though misleading is ill advised for investment it can be good for a twist so long as it is not too far- fetched. I have been enjoying the story thus far and just figured I would make a criticism in how showing too much of the characters thoughts may take a lot of investment out of the story and it takes more work than just showing how the character reacts. I hope this review brought some new insight on potential methods to increase reader investment and potentialy decrease workload.

I just wanted to say, I got all giddy when you posted this chapter! I'm happy that you're taking the time to build it up, and since you've delivered amusingly with hype before I'm sure it'll be worth it. You're really good at setting tension, and your writing style is engaging.

Half way through the chapter, I felt a little underwhelmed because I let my imagination handle all the juicy bits, like "ohmygodhowiskirishimagonnareacthumanityisgonnagonutsafterwefinallyrevealthatkilluaandgonarefromanotherworld" and all that crap

But then I realized it's more sensible to build it up. Much better payoff, and I shouldn't let the hype consume my rationality.

I'm pleased to see you all fine and well in these times, so hats off to you. Love your work, and take your time.

Seeing Gon having to lie is breaking my heart lmao and I feel sad because the 1A is feeling betrayed argh
are u trying to kill me ?
kaminari i love u bro "its hard do judge" yes thats it dont judge without knowing *pat his head
yeah ojiro but he actually thinks about other so I think he would have save u anyway just not by killing the guy
jirou you're one clever girl
I swear to god if they ask Gon and this idiot reveals the truth and they end being all involved
I can just imagine killua coming back and the atmosphere in the class
lmaoooo killua vs muscular ahahahah what a good way to die
my poor toga She makes me sad and I'm reading the manga actually and I'm in a part with her so double sadness
twiccceceee i love u too. *is crying insind

Bro when the league will come for bakugo the teachers are gonna look at killua like he's a bitch

me waiting for an amazing moment where Killua and Gon will show that the mha's world doesnt actually have a chance against them

I’m in love with your writing :

It would be cool if killua kindof welladdooted toga since her type of messed up wouldn’t be too off putting to him or in his world she would fit in plus they are both kinda reminiscent in of cats hell I could see him getting her and twice to go with him that would likely give the hero’s an option to eventually remove two powerfully generally unstableness and potentially catastrophically dangerous individuals who are villains not directly due to malice but due to circumstance, hell they could sell it as sending two lesser yet dangerous villains away through exile rather than securing them on feathers. this would give twice and toga a chance to find a place where they belong in which society didn’t shun them to the extent they are now plus it’s fun seeing toga getting killua to act a bit like a tsundere and twice would be a cool brother figure to compensate for the two Garbo and one kinda Garbo bro’s he has. That would be a notable impact that wouldn’t drastically change the MHA world

this story is so good, the conflicting perspectives on what to do makes me tense up, please keep updating!

I love this ajsnsnnsndndnnswn

Yes! This is what I wanted, the dilema tha the heros face in this circumstances! And I would like the heros and students could know a little bit more of the Hxh world and get a glimpe of a world mostly in caos, most likely grey. Keep it up! I like your aproach of the story! :)

Wait so the next chapter is about to be like the attack plan and Gon?

Good work as usual :)

Now, this is getting nerve-wracking. Killua is out as 100% villain, All Might still think what he did is right. And Gon is all alone. I hope they can get their way back to their world, and I hope if Killua is stuck against heroes Gon is gonna help him out. Selfless or not he is still his best friend.

I really enjoyed this whole story so far, update plz lol.

I actually really enjoyed the interaction between All Might and Killua. Also about the fight between Killua and All Might, when the zoldyck butler talked about Killua traveling across the unequal terrain, Killua wasn't using Godspeed the whole time, maybe half and half or even less because he wanted to save his electricity in case of a fight. Also, the reason Gon is mostly indifferent to Killua's killing is mostly because of how the HxH world is. It's mostly lawless where power matters so people are more selfish and care about themselves and others more. Ofc Gon is pretty selfless but the world still shapes people and people getting killed is a lot more normal.