That was an awesome chapter!
I agree that Keith should have been removed from the team for his actions. Honestly, I never knew what the Black Lion even saw in him in the series. So, I'm glad that Keith now will learn from his mistakes. Haggar is a wonderful leader to lead Voltron.
Looking forward to what you have in store for the future chapters, my friend.

Great chapter man!

Now that was a terrific new chapter buddy! Even though the confrontation and fight scene between Lance and Keith was incredibly short...the love scene between Allura and Haggar made up for it. The sex scene was hot...especially after you had the two lovers use the strap on dildo!

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

I loved this chapter! Well, done my friend.
That you made Allura to trust Keith a bit sooner would definitely make more sense, since Haggar is there with her now.
The lovemaking scene was smoking hot! Best one so farAnd the idea of Allura and Haggar settle down on Earth is a great idea. Since they lost their home world, Altea and have nowhere else to go. Also, what the private talk between Pidge/Katie and the Altean princesses was about makes me curious. Hope to see that soon.
Looking forward to the final fight with Zarkon

Great chapter, as always!

Excellent chapter as always!

You made my suggestions for this chapter very will in it! I enjoyed it from beginning to end!

Loved it. Absolutely loved it!

Yey! A new update!

So long too! So worth the wait!

Loved the whole chapter from beginning to end! :D

Now that was a great new chapter buddy. It was very dark and tragic: having Haggar being plagued by Zarkon's last words before she severed all mental links between them and being devastated to find the fossilized remains of her parents and seeing their final moments from their remains...how Zarkon murdered them.

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, where Allura and the Paladins rescue her lover...and two princess lovers make love for the next time.

Wow! I’m so happy you have kept most of my suggestive lines into this chapter! And i got to say, you make the story better in your own words. Looking forward to the next chapter (which I’m certainly going to help you with again

Now that was a pretty fantastic new chapter buddy. It was very hilarious when you had Haggar put a healthy fear of God into Lance after he should his pervy side and gave her the idea that he wanted to do 'inappropriate things' with her princess lover.

Plus, the chase scene at the mall near the ending was pretty funny as well: as both Lance and Hunk were running from a Galran store owner and security guard after they stole a video game console was hilarious, especially with Hunk crying as they ran before they were saved by Haggar.

That was a great and fun chapter, my friend. I’m glad that drunken and abusive man got what he deserved. Hurting your own daughter and not feeling any remorse, is for me nothing put pure evil!
Looking forward to the next chapter :D

Great chapter, my friend. I loved the part where Allura told that she was willingly to give up being a princess, so she could be with Haggar. That is what i call true love! 3
I also lived the part where Haggar broke all connections with Zarkon... and mentioning her parents.
I look forward when you are going to publish the 3 chapters you’ve mentioned. But i think a chapter before that would be fine by meKeep up the good work!