Really enjoying this! And I hope you and your family all recover soon!
I love the plot already, its so different from anything, and especially as you've kept her original personality I feel but 'vamped it upheh). Already loving Peter too!

Love , love this story! Please continue u have all the best characters and I can’t wait to see jasper in action

When I said she I meant bella..

please oh please continue this story soon, hoping she is a copier/sponge(her main gift) and can take other Vampire's power for herself also that she still has her mental physical shield . Can't wait for more

I get what Bella was saying when talking with Peter. Although, reading your breakdown of the scene at the end of the chapter made more sense. She is from the future, and because she's now in the past, anything she does has consequences. Especially when it comes to her feeding on people. I love badass Bella. Scare those newborn vampires girl! I'm happy to read that your parents are doing better, and also glad you're recovering too. Looking forward to your next update :)

I love your story. I really hope you continue writing it. I just found it today, and got so involved with reading it that, even though I knew you had only written a few chapters, I didn't even realize that I had already clicked through all six when I got to the end. I was so disappointed that there wasn't more to read. Please, please, please, continue it!

I also wanted you to know that not everyone misunderstood Bella's point of view of the rapists in your story. I, and I'm sure many others, completely understood that you what she was saying wasn't in anyway condoning rape, or any other violence or suffering inflicted on people as being a good thing, because suffering makes progress. What she was saying was that any change to the past, from a time travelers perspective, whether it that change seems positive or negative could drastically affect the future in unknown ways.

It reminds me of Stephen Kings book "1964". Great story if you haven't read it. It deals with the same type of scenario from an opposite perspective. In it the protagonist goes back in time to save JFK, believing that if he had lived the Vietnam War would never have happened and mankind would be better off. *Spoiler alert*, it doesn't turn out that way. He saves JFK, doing a good thing, and prevented the Vietnam War, also saving thousands of lives. However the ramification for mankind turns out to be awful. Causing even greater suffering and war, and turning the world into a post apocalyptic dystopia. Great book, I love time travel.

Anyway, what I'm trying to say is I got it, and I'm sure a lot of others did. I think you did a great job at explaining Bella's thoughts on the matter in your story as well. Some people are probably just too sensitive to any subject involving sexual assault to be able to look at anything that mentions it from an outside, objective point of view. That's a shame, but not your fault. Please don't let some people's hangup's and sensitivities prevent you from continuing such a great story.

Jasper and Bella are my OTP, but its so hard to find well written Jasper/Bella. Please, please, please continue it!

-Thank you.

Your story is so good... 3
hope you're doing well

Great story! Hope you and your family are safe and healthy.

I hope you and your family are doing well. These are odds times and reading your very well written fic and the characters and the plot and all of the wonderful things you are doing with this fic. Personally, I don't understand how someone can interpret that scene as Bella being pro-rape. It definitely read to me as her being anxious and concerned about messing with the timeline by killing people. But people are always going to read what they want to read. I can not wait for the next update! Your writing is beautiful, your characters and wonderful and well thought out, your plot is intriguing- perfect all around!

Yasss! Vampire Bella! Can't wait for more Bella/Jasper moments! Beautifully written! I love Peter.

Aww tehir both still so humane- giving her a momento and being soft with her. I can't wait to see how you write the Major in his element and how Bella will react. And what about Alice and Edward and the clan? I love the possibilities in this story and can't wait to see where you go with it. Did I mention I love your Bella and Peter? So good. *Chefs Kiss!*

I want to quote so many of your lines back to you because you write beautifully but it wont let me copy and paste and I'm too lazy to write it out. I love your writing style and your Bella- she's such a badass. Peter is adorable and I love him too.

I never got why they left Bella there without protection when they had just killed a vampire's mate. And then the whole her knowing that vampires exist thing- didn't make sense. I figured it was just that SMeyer didn't have her ducks in a row just yet with the plot and other characters and whatnot. I love your reminder of Bella and a glimpse at the clan without her. Also: Edward can suck a duck.

OOhhhh I love it! Can't wait to read more. I like Carlos and Bella's characterization. Usually not a fan of time travel but I'm loving this and can't wait to read more!

Love it and can't wait for more.