Reviews for A Descendant of Legends
DragonTetho chapter 14 . 16h
Mhm, I wonder what will Jaune do in the near future? Man, I hope he finds a good excuse with all the knowledge he has on those monsters as Remnant will badly need those informations so that they could fight back those monsters.

I still ship Weiss and Jaune or Jaune and Ruby.
Spartastic 4 chapter 21 . 8/24
Has it already been a year? Fuck man... congrats.

Anyway, just some minor spelling mistakes throughout the chapter. God I hope that Jaune’s family embarrasses him. I was wonderin why you flipped the events around and now Insee as for why. And it seems as though Courage may be whole again soon... can’t wait for that can of worms to open up. But it seems like my guess didn’t react to the half piece, though I feel like it may be a ploy to divert us from who she is. But what’s Amber been up to? Been a whole since you mentioned her. Sure we’ll see her soon.

Either way, I look forward to more. Best of luck with your endeavors.
Guest chapter 21 . 8/24
Dark link has a blue shield? I know there is only one shield in Zelda that's blue. Also, gotta say this is amazing, I actually feel like Jaune is indeed a reincarnation of the spirit of the hero from just reading this. Can't wait to see what follows.
Fyr RedNight chapter 21 . 8/24
First thing first, happy anniversary! How time flies...

This chapter was sweet all around, I particularly liked the dance scene.

And this ending! Things are about to get lively around our hero... Can't wait!
Roy4 chapter 21 . 8/24
It is certainly very curious to know who will be the legitimate heir to the triforce of power and wisdom?

Is it Ruby Rose?
Will it be Weiss Schnee?
Could it be Pyrrha Nikos?
Is it Yang Xiao-Long?
Or could it be Blake?

But the final act where The Evil seems to have awakened. It means that the real challenge is about to begin. And it will be the decisive moment if Jaune is prepared to protect Renmant from that Evil.
Steelrain66 chapter 21 . 8/23
Things are coming to a head eh? While I fear for Pyrrha as her actually getting to share her feelings properly before her death just adds to the pain for us and Jaune. Nothing motivates a hero like a dead lover after all and its not like he would be the first "link" do be motivated by others.
Warlus999 chapter 21 . 8/23
The end of this arc, it does mark the beginning of something epic.

The 'pieces' have already been arranged, and it only remains for someone to make the first move for everything to go uphill. Something that literally leaves me paralyzed with emotion, imagining what is in store for our beloved protagonists.

My english is not very good as it is not my mother tongue. So I apologize for any errors that appear in this mediocre translation, or the omission of some events in the story. since the google translator, if he eats one or another paragraph in the translation; and I have to reread it all so that I realize what I missed. Like the grammatical errors in my previous comment.

I adore this story, and it has not disappointed me in the least.

Everything has finally started. And I love how you built all the lore and base scenarios of the story. For the best bows in the future, they can be developed wonderfully.

I am from Mexico, and this story managed to reach me to this part of the world, which I translated the first ten chapters by hand and word. In order to have them in spanish and I could reread it as many times as I wanted. Nothing illegitimate, I swear. Je.

This is very good. And while I would have liked more dialogue and different interactions, I must admit your point. It is better not to review, than to do it and seem that the reading is heavy.

Several unknowns and factors were closed in this arch closure...

... The introduction of RWBY to the magical and divine lore of history, although they have their doubts; the consolidation of the friendly relationship between Jaune and Pyrrha, with a few extra touches; the location of the Triforce of Power, and its reveal; the location of the another half of Triforce of Courage, so what he plans; the consolidation of the villains, which I have to admit, if they look menacing in this way; and the implementation of the various secondary plots, which will take one or another relevance in itpassing of history.

This is honestly going to be good. I'll keep waiting for what you have in store for us. But I'm already sure, that I came to stay.
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 21 . 8/23
Good chapter I wonder what Salem plaing also if Ruby turns out Zelda I'm going to laugh mainly because I need the bit were Jaune asks Ruby to fix the master sword
Spartastic 4 chapter 20 . 8/18
So that’s Jaune’s father. Interesting. Hopefully Jaune won’t have to face too much of his mom’s and sisters’ wrath... oh gawhd it can be horrible... anyway, nice job man. Pretty basic and straight forward, didn’t know that they introduced the Hydra in one of the manga. May have to check it out.

Anyway, best of luck with your endeavors and lookin forward to more.
jeremiahkelley93 chapter 20 . 8/13
great action chapter.
Steelrain66 chapter 20 . 8/8
Woot blitzd your story in one go! So freaking good man! And while I have some serious guesses at what your going to do with Zeldas reincarnation (cus you need the third piece of the tri force.) that's about all I got cus I have no idea where this ride is going. Jaune is in some deep shit with very little to help me out on the Hero side of things, though that might be to balance out having a lot more backup then most versions of Link typically get.
Guest chapter 20 . 8/8
Wonder if i can learn the lore of LoZ from this hehe
The Black Wolf of the Arks chapter 20 . 8/8
What an intense chapter, you did a good work with the breach. Now let's see how Jaune's meeting with Ozpin will go, and how team RWBY will react to what is really going on, specially if Qrow goes with him to explain, as I think that RWBY will doubt everything otherwise, even with all the non-grimm monsters like the Bokoblins poping up out of nowhere.

About the Spirit Stones, honestly I'm not sure either. I don't remember where I heard about that though I think it was from a Zeltik video on Youtube. That said it isn't that far-fetched, is it? Puting the colors at side, the way of how the Stones/Pendants works as a proof of Link's worthiness is similar at how the Sacred Flames worked, even if their main purpose was to reforge the Divine Sword into the Master Sword instead of granting access to it. That said, it's pretty much an hypothesis more to the Zelda series, not even a theory, so don't take it too seriously.

I'll be looking forward the next one, keep up and good luck.
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 20 . 8/8
good chapter the breach happended Jaune's dad made a cameo amoug other things also can't wait for everyone's reactions
Warlus999 chapter 20 . 8/8
It is simply surprising how a good story takes you to swallow more than twenty chapters and 170 thousand words, in less than two days.

I just started reading this fanfic, and I was hooked enough to finish everything available, like an addict.

Simply put, this is fucking awesome. Everything. from the mixture of both universes to the interactions of characters and their evolution. Not forgetting the battle sequences, which are not descriptive enough to bore but dynamic enough to entertain. and the adventurous-style explorations of this world by the protagonists, who are simply beautiful. Exploring Akkala and the Lost Woods was entertaining and enjoyable to read.

This story promises a lot. and boy does it disappoint by showing us everything that the future inclusion of Happy Mask Saleman, Skull Kid and the Temple of Time, were magnificent to introduce the JNPR team directly to the magical world of Zelda and the subsequent fight that will take place between light and darkness.

Which makes me wonder, now what great evils have been released thanks to that folly of Jaune? Will we ever see key characters from past Zelda sagas who survived until Remnant? Will Jaune reveal the truth to team RWBY, in time before something or someone comes along and puts them in danger?

It would be great to see gigantic monsters that had been sealed or asleep in Remnant, and are now awakened by that hack that Jaune tried to do. because apparently, always in these fantasy worlds like those of Zelda, they love to have powerful monsters buried by time and sand, in order to wake up and face the protagonists in the future.

Self-made monsters would be wonderfully welcome. Like Grimms, like that Hydra Grimm that was not seen from the manga. It would be great to see a Minotaur Grimm like some kind of Chupacabra spreading through Remnant. Monsters and Grimms. Ja.
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