i looooooooooooooooooooooove it i can not wait to read more ) a new chapter soon, please?

Seeing the story from Ron's point of view is actually really cute can't wait to see more and how the story develops

How would Sirius react/deal with Harry under another moonspell? Would Harry go back to the moon pool and Sirius rushing to follow or even Harry going through the power control problems during the full moon and Sirius dealing with the consequences? Just some ideas to consider. Love this fic.

truthfully it was a bit boring as I wasn't that interested or invested in Ron's angsty pov on things. it felt too much like a filler chapter. it was well written tho, just not my cuppa.

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Your is awesome please update soon.

Ron needs to remember that he has what Harry wants. A family. I guess men can get that tattoo too.

like always i loooooooooooooooove this fic is amazing and i can not wait to read more ) a new chapter soon , please?

your story is amazing! i love it soooo much! i have spent all day reading it! please keep this going!i can not wait to find out what happen next!

This is like chapter 6 all over again.

Lovely story, i hope you write soon

Omg. This story is bloody amazing. Please update this soon

I feel like you've speed up the story too much. You've written so much character development and we haven't even gotten to third year yet! The story is starting to lag now that time seems to be at a standstill. The story doesn't seem to be progressing even with all the developments. If you spread out the current plot/developments over the course of a year and a summer, it would smooth over everything and I, as the reader, would feel like the story is going somewhere. I really love the idea you have going here. I would just love to see a better execution of it so I can enjoy it to its full potential.

Harry and Draco would be first cousin once removed. Their common ancestors are in the grandparents which makes them first cousins. The 'once removed' stems from them not sharing a DIRECT grandparent and only a siibling of the grandparentthe great uncle or great aunt.

Hermoso bello precioso excelente