Here’s my review for this chapter. Wonderful, nothing more nothing less. I do have some suggestions though, but don’t take it too seriously or anything. In my OPINION I think that maybe Ryuu could teach Cain fighting tricks and stuff. And maybe get Cain a skill or something. Something that stimulates growth like bells Learis Freeze. But instead of immediately going to the phase where Cain just grinds for like the next 5 chapters I suggest taking it a bit different. I don’t know, maybe create another incident with meeting Fels, or meeting a certain Loki familia member. And once you create this scenarios then proceed to do the whole grinding levels process. It would be funny to also add a description of their faces(Loki Familia) to know that a person like Cain just broke the leveling up record. Maybe add some new characters such as Freya,Hestia, and stuff. Would be hilarious if Cain was immune to her charm too. Welp, those are just some ideas of mine. Please take it without much consideration it’s just something I thought of in my spare time.

While it is a time skip and very random it's at least chronological and each can be taken as a piece on it's own so it is fairly entertaining to read.

We gots a CaptainSpookles fan here.

this slice of life is gold

I have an Idea when I was reading the potion making bit. What if Cain accidentally made a love potion? BUT! It only affects girls.

"Ripping off" Fate/Stay Night huh? That reminds me...
IS "The Unseen Guardian" DEAD? ON HAITUS? IN PROGRESS? PLEASE, GIVE ME CLOSURE

nice

Ok, I liked the chapter but 2 questions, uno, where was mama Mia when Cain was running from the girls or what was she doing, and ,dos, where did Cain come up with the name Umbra, did he just think it sounded cool and came up with it on the spot or is it from something he knows, ie a person or a thing on “Earth”. If you can’t answer in the chapter please just message me or something the answer. Thx. Really like the story

Nice an update keep up the good work I'll be waiting patiently for more.
Also wouldn't it be nice that Cain here makes stories from our world and sell them? Like anime, movies, SCP, Warhammer 40k to name a few.
And a missed opportunity to call himself Kira Yoshikage and make a monologue about himself and why he helps them against evilus because they disturbed he's peace.

Poor poor Nantoka, he may never get a sip of that sweat nectar again :p
would be funny if he goes into the hostess and orders a cup though, so many possibilities...
Good work man, I can only recommend that you make an accompanying work if you want to flesh out the events of the time skip. That way you can continue plot line development whilst Also being able to expand this part of the story whenever you like.

This would be the best of both worlds imho, as you can use your ideas without interfering with your plot development as a kind of extra you can drop in whenever you like instead of having to become locked in to getting them done before you can progress with your story. and as this would be a kind of 'untold tales' thing you can wright it whenever you still want to wright but feel stuck or want to give your mind a brake from your main plot. And just because something isn't in the story as we have it now didn't mean it can't be used later if it becomes relevent, if you do this you could even use something that hadn't been written yet as a plot point.

Well good work man, looking firewood to the next drop whenever

HahahahaHHHH final one was genius

This is actually pretty good. I want more slice of life like this. Well received indeed.

Also awaiting for next chapter.

Que le den al café

Dude you updated nice! I can see that Cain is good looking when he's dressed up like a waitress either that or he's just that trappy or feminine! I also like how he's slightly OP even with those stats it seems like he's really good at fighting and avoiding people cuz of his past life maybe I'm looking too deep into it. Anyways! Thank you for updating and thank you for making this such a long chapter!

Yay you updated! Damn! Is Cain a bishoujo dressing up like a waitress or what? Those are some fine looking stats I see! Also I like how Cain is being slightly OP, but that's probably just cause he's more knowledgeable on how to fight. Idk maybe I'm looking too deep into it! Fantastic chapter, it was really long too! And thank you for updating!