this is very interesting and I wonder since Harry/Jasper is there to help her and become like an brother to her will he be able to make sure she doesn't go as insane as she did originally? Wil he be able to help her not suffer the miscarriages she does and make it so she doesn't end up going back with Petyr? Which ended up with Jon's death? And a lot of other death for that matter? Will Harry/JAsper ever be meeting Petyr and if so how would he react to him? Oh this is so interesting please keep it up as I would so love to read more of this.

Loving this can't wait for you to update my only complaint is length of chapters but with how well the story is going it's only a small complaint.

Good idea.. But your writing style is not good enough. Acceptable, but need improvement. Good luck

newspaper would be too costly for smallfolk, especially in westeros where they don't have much money, but rather practical things such as lands, tools and animals

Cool! please update it soon!

Cool story so far! :) I really like what Jasper has done with the Weirwood trees, especially the godswood at the Erie.

diggerboy4 can't even finish a story so down lysine to him. you might say all he can do is dig a hole to put his story in. Only 2 chapters diggerboy4 come on...

Keep it coming plz it is good

What a great story! I love it! Dont let that dickhole who did a flame review get you down! This is a really good story! I cant wait for more chapters!

Nice idea with the canal.

A canal in the Riverlands should be interesting. There'd probably be some development of villages along it.

In really enjoying this; I never get to read stories with a sympathetic Lysa. Hopefully Jasper will be able to prevent any miscarriages, since that will probably stabilize her mental state and get her mind off Litttlefinger.

excellent work

Your reasoning on the canal is quite sound. Nice to see another chapter, but I'm feeling like the story is starting to drag.

This is great can’t wait for more