| Reviews for Infinity Train: Bryce's Story |
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Michael Moore2 chapter 16 . 8/11 Can't we just skip to the ball pit car please |
StoriesUnleashed chapter 16 . 8/11 This chapter was just great, it had a lot of intense action, interesting drama, and some great heartwarming moments. I love the interesting expansion of lore stuff in the mirror world and the mirror selfs, making the mirror selfs of Ava, Bailey, Bryce and Penny different personality wise whlie creating them aspects of to show their own person(and not the same like the show itself brings out in MT). Plus the added lore of the Fleck going to kill Tulip to keep the Barrier of their mirror world is also great and interesting, not to mention really showing those guys as more deadlier then expected. Also another great part of this chapter was the character exportation, specifically with Bryce and Bailey. With Bryce we learn more of why he’s very overprotective and tries to resolve things on his own like we’ve seen in the story so far, he’s mostly does it not only out of love for his friends but also because he feels like his responsibility/the only one to get the job done so his friends wouldn’t worry. This it shows is sometimes leads to more consequences then expect like his bank robbery and whatnot, showing that his do it himself thing isn’t always the best crouse of action and he learns to work on that after self reflection in the car(pun intended). Also Bailey character development with her own overprotective nature shown stemmed from her self doubt on if she can still be of use/needed by Penny after everything she’d gone through on the train, but through her reflection self Bailey knows better now that she is needed by Penny because of how they’ll get to know each together which is super heartwarming. on top of that the MT depth and drama was expanded on really well with Bryce laying into her on how bad the trick she pulled, but also noting she isn’t a total bad person but was just desperate to be her own person which is a good thing to want but it has to be under good things to start that off, which she starts to after leaving the chrome car(with Bryce making her promise to not trick peeps anymore) she’ll be her own person without worry, which is awesome. Overall the chapter was great, I loved the characters depth, the references to Alice in wonder land books with Ava(with a bit character depth in using her brains to think on what the car was and using questions to find out her theories on it where correct or not), funny bits with Rexy and One-one(the jelly bean one with the feet was my fav joke outta him yet), and that big revel on Night shroud is another Tulip was a truly great one(but still the mystery of how she’s here and why she hates Bryce to be answered) and not to mention the mystery of the conductor sudden captivation with Ava towards the end is another mystery that I can’t wait to see reveled. A great chapter and I can’t wait to see the final arc come and see what other cool twist and turns you can whip up in this story. Keep up the great work. Your fan, cartoonman. |
Angelwings2002 chapter 16 . 8/10 Yay! Mirror Tulip is here and this was a great chapter with all the added characters. And we f to see what Bryce’s number is too! Great work as always! |
Lunar Moon Butterfly chapter 15 . 8/7 Awww! Little Penny is adorable! But with Infinity Train Book two, it is revealed that people who were born on the train can’t go to the real world. How will that work with Penny and her mom? |
silverstudent chapter 15 . 8/5 awesome chapter. i'm glad the resistance car is done. it is hard keep up with original chapters and now i can read it without forgetting the previous chapter. i can't wait for chrome car and next chaptes. |
OMAC001 chapter 15 . 8/5 Perfect end to a mid-season episode. Answers so many question and yet leaves new ones to answer! |
StoriesUnleashed chapter 15 . 8/5 This final part of this two parter chapter was in one word EPIC! Truly epic! It had everything drama, intense action, suspence, romance, heroic speeches, and a grand final with a foreboding peek at what comes in the future of the story. Everything was just prefect in my opinion. Just a prefect chapter. There's a lot of great stuff but my faverate stuff was, in order, the moment Penny comforted her mom that lead to their heartwarming reunion, The Tinkerer using the red juice stuff like Bane from batman to make himself stronger, Atticus ralling the denzins to fight the scarecrows, meeting EVE and getting to see her backstory, everyone(besides the scarecrows) coming to hug Penny to encrouage EVE to stand up to the dark code, and finally the very end the hint of Night Shroud's ID towards the end with the hair color and green hood under her cloak. Those where my very favorates from the chapter. But overall this chapter was great and really bookends Penny's growth as a character in a great way in this two parter(as well as having other great character stuff with Rexy, Ava, Penny's mom and even some of the scarecrows). Not to metion the cool twist of Tuba and Hazel being in it, definately a great connection to upcoming book 3. Everything was just great and felt like a big tv epoisde which makes it more awesome. Keep up the great work. Your fan, cartoonman. |
Angelwings2002 chapter 15 . 8/4 Whoa. Just whoa...THIS WAS SO AWESOME! You did such a great job with this chapter and I am excited for what is going to happen next! Loved Tuba and Hazel showing up! Nice twist! |
DC20 chapter 7 . 7/30 I gotta say, that last car was tough but man I just want to make sure I never sing again Jerry: I never thought you can sing, especially this "Sussudio" name you call it I just wanted to be my happy place cause it was soothing and easy to dance with the beat Jerry: C'mon Lincoln, it wasn't that bad Not unless you were born in the '80s (Door opens, it was a rain forest) Jerry: Corginia never have anything like these do Figures its a rain forest... I guess we're hiking the woods till we find the exit AN HOUR LATER... I swear, we pass the same tree like 8 times already... we're going in circles Jerry: I suggest we can take a break For once I agree (Tree snaps, we react as we brace ourselves, just then a black little girl jump in front shocking us but at the same time we got grab by an ape) ?: Awwww, such a cute little puppy Jerry: You mean Lincoln? I think she's talking about you (Then the little girl walk towards Jerry and gave him a belly rub, Jerry in his doggie nature relax at her touch) Jerry: Ah, ooh, yes, right there I know you and your furry friend are nice and all but me and Jerry here are in a hurry, we are in pursuing someone and trying to find the exit ?: Ooh, I can find the exit, me and Tuba can take you there Oh well, I guess you could help... I have some candy in my pocket, will that satisfy you? ?: Sure! Tuba, you can let them go (Tuba did as command) Jerry: You are a good person, you send my itch away, thank you... oh right, I forget to ask your name ?: It's Hazel That's a pretty name! (Gave Hazel some Skittles) Here, that's candy Hazel: (Ate one) Yum, it's delicious Good, now let's get to the exit (They walk through 2 rivers, past a rock shape arrow, and there the exit) Jerry: Thanks Hazel Hazel: Actually thank the nice people who were here, that red hair with the glasses and that adorable girl hanging with her brother (Both of them gasp in shock) Both: Tulip and Bryce? Hazel: Yes, that's their names One other thing.. was there a villain involved? Hazel: That Night Shroud guy, Both: Night Shroud? Hazel: Yeah, I have creepy vibe from him and I don't like it (Thoughts) Something tells me Amelia isn't the only threat that has to watch out for, I didn't know there's another one till Hazel mentioned it Jerry: You didn't make contact with it Hazel? Hazel: Nope, Night Shroud didn't see me, if he did Tuba would've beat him to protect me That's the right call, and a good call too (After the long conversation, the duo lead towards the jungle of the end where we see the door) Hazel: There, that's the exit Jerry: Thanks Hazel and Tuba One other thing Hazel... are you a passenger by any chance? Hazel: Passenger? What do you mean by passenger? Jerry: Oh, I get it... you mean their glowing numbers on their right hand? Hazel: Ooh, so that's why- I do have a number on my hand (She shows her right hand, it did have a number but it isn't glowing) (Thought) She is one... but why isn't it glowing? Could it be a malfunction? A glitch in the system? Something isn't right here Hazel: So... am I a passenger? Uh... Yes, you are a passenger, and as long as you have a number on your right hand then the key to reacing it zero is possible Hazel: Ooh... it's like a game? Goody, I wanna play Jerry: Lincoln? Oh right, well thank you Hazel and Tuba for leading the way, maybe we might cross paths again someday Hazel: Bye Lincoln and Jerry (They exit through the door as Hazel and Tuba waved) Jerry: Lincoln, you didn't want her to come with us? No, not yet actually... while I was eyeing Hazel, my mind showed a future vision... apparently a group who call themselves the Apex will meet Hazel and Tuba, that's what I saw Jerry: The Apex? Who are they? They are the ones who follow Amelia's way of staying and... increasing their numbers up instead of down Jerry: I just hope we don't meet them Same here Jerry... but for now there's 2 threats we have to worry about Jerry: Yeah, onward and forward to Ms. Tulip, Bryce, and Penny! To Be Continued... ((BTW, just wanted to add of the new characters for the upcoming Book 3 of Infinity Train, the whole Books 1 & 2 are on HBO Max, the new one Book 3 is set for August 13, 2020 and its continuation)) |
Michael Moore2 chapter 14 . 7/16 How long until we get to the Chrome car |
OMAC001 chapter 14 . 7/7 Wow, this chapter in particular has had a lot of twists and turns! |
StoriesUnleashed chapter 14 . 7/5 This is a great chapter so far, it really got me hyped to see part 2 of it. All of it keeps an epic, tense, high stakes adventure from the last chapter and wonderful character interaction whlie taking it to new highs. Everyone in this has a moment to shine and bounce of each other in a great natural way in each moment. I love how stuff moves at a good quick but even pace, making the events flow into each other like a continuous shot from a movie. My fav highlights where how the Scarecrows get more characters depth moments like Chain’s cunning and slightly concern when trying to convince Tulip and Bryce to the Scarecrow way of life through taking on their weakness they face(Tulip with her numbers and Bryce with his need to protect everyone) but has a more concerning side when he check Tulip if she is alive after his session goes wrong showing he isn’t so bad(or at least appears to be) and with Julius(aka Tinkerer) with his backstory of being abused from his fellow hitchhikers scientists that lead to him letting Osore in to mess everything up shows how desperate and bitter he is with slight hints of kindness still in him somewhere given he saved Penny’s mom from his fellow scarecrows(in a twisted kinda way but still). Another great thing I loved was the plot twists of Penny’s mom remember who she is and the leader of scarecrows has a daughter with it being Carper, it has big consequences and changes like Penny’s mom getting captured along with Tabby as well as Carper relationship with her father helps her keep the dark code Secret for him that’ll shake up the chapter later on/in the chapter now. Other great stuff like Penny and West with Alan D’s help to tunnel(with him only helping when Penny asked him nicely), Keirra playing on the scarecrows rivalry to get the gang in scarecrows base, a deep look into scarecrows way of treating passengers and their goings on in their car, Bryce nearly falling for Chain’s treatment, and many other stuff that really add emotion and character depth/detail that make it truly investing. Overall a great frist part of a rescue for Penny and the gang, with well written characters stuff and lore stuff that really make this the best chapter so far in my opinion. Keep up the great work! Your fan, cartoonman. PS: my fav character interaction was Ava, Atticus and Rexy in the zoo subplot with the witty but friendly chats between them as they free Atticus from a cage in the zoo and go to release the rest of the zoo inmates by getting to the button to open the cages. XD |
Angelwings2002 chapter 14 . 7/4 Okay, I have no words to describe how awesome this chapter was! Especially the ending! This was so worth the wait! It was amazing! Great job! |
OMAC001 chapter 13 . 5/6 Can't wait to see more like..what are the Scarecrows doing with the passengers?! |
StoriesUnleashed chapter 13 . 4/28 This chapter part two of this arc for Penny and company, it was super awesome! It was super epic with great drama, interesting revels of info on certain characters and the car itself, some new interesting characters, all wrapped up a well written and pace super engaging story. Everything about this chapter was again very epic, the character development Penny goes through this chapter, learning more about her parents/the car she once was apart of, what happened to both so far, seeing all of that with her inner thoughts/actions of going through all of it without blaming herself anymore and building up her courage to save her friends trapped by the Scarecrows. Not to mention she not blaming others like Tabby or Kierra but instead decided to understand and sympathize with them, taking her experience with Bryce to heart and matured enough to never blame others for bad choices or circumstances beyond their control which is cool. Penny is really growing into a great young girl in this arc that built up over all the chapters to now, which is awesome. Another thing is the insight to some of the Scarecrows like their leader and the scientist, showcasing their fears of death/tragic way they got their scars(the leader) and how they have care over assistant that they try to hide a bit(the scientist) in great ways in flashback and actions. The new characters like Ava, Rexy and Kierra has really interesting personalities, backstories and interacting with other/each other. Ava and Rexy are interesting and funny characters(even having a deep connection that drives their adventure in the train, with Ava sreaching for her mom and all). And Kierra is the most interesting new character with a easily relatable problem that got her on the trian and and heartbreaking backstory that drives her to be better, with some encouraging from Penny of crouse(which was heartwarming). The greatest thing about this chapter was the expanded flashback of Tabby becoming the renegade and her connection to the car itself, her backstory of a scientist working on the cube that got corrupted by Osore casuing the tragedy in the car and her saving only a few(including Penny) but unable to save her besties Penny’s mom was sad and really shows what drives her to become the renegade to save passengers and hitchhikers in the car, it’s awesome and plus helps explain her complex emotional stuff that happens in the chapter(and also her scar on her arm caused by Osore). Everything was just prefect in this chapter, from the bits with Penny to the gang being taken to the Scarecrows city, everything was just great. My fav parts where the Scarecrows trying to trick the gang by lying about their history(which is pretty funny but mostly Brantley diabolical), Bryce hitting the Scarecrows leader in the face, Alan D’s cameo, and Penny hugging Tabby to make her feel a bit better after reveling some of her tragic backstory. Overall a great part 2 of this new arc and I can’t wait to see more in the future. Keep up the great work and have a great day. Your fan, cartoonman. |