I can't, I can't it hurts

omg fireheart! bro i love this story so much, youre giving fireheart a very unique personality that isnt "doormat nice dude", instead hes somewhat surly, still kind but absolutely will lay down the law when necessary. i love love love fireheart! thank you so much for writitng!

So excited for the next arc!

Darkstripe as deputy, what a twist. Still hope he dies though
I wonder what Cinderpaws new warrior nae will be hmm...
Well it was a good book au, see you next one.

yass c u next book

Honestly the Darkstripe deputy thing does not surprise me

Cinderspark, Cinderflame, Cinderpool and Cindergaze are some of my favourite Cinderpaw suffixes
Diieeee Darkstripeeeeee!
Also yay! Dangerous Path soon! Congratulations on getting so far!
Are you going to continue with this through the New Prophecy?
Anyway, enjoyed! Cya next time!

asap not asp

I understand it may take a while but update asp

Well, now that you've pointed it out, it's kind of true. Greystripe does seem kind of an asshole in this canon. It's just kind of too bad that you don't like Greystripe that much and, well, turn his character like that. I just kinda see Greystripe as neutral in the actual books.'cause he did kind of help Firestar in the actual books for some parts. But then again, it's not up to me to judge on what you like and what you don't .

So anyway, on a high note, the new chapter made everything way clearer, so thanks for that! And I'm glad Firestar at least reflected on stuff, not like Greystripe, the one that you made to look like an asshole. Not gonna go against that though. Your story, you write it. I'll just deal with it,

I agree Graystripe was a giant d*ck. Sure he couldn't help falling in love, but the way he treated his love as a priority over all else, including Fireheart and his apprentice, was too far. I'm not seeing these two becoming friends again for a long time.

Silverstream being supportove of her husband is certaonly cute, but Dustpelts commen stung a little

I love Firestar when he was a kit, he is so funny!

you called fireheart pale ginger queen when he said 2 moons

I agree with how Graystripe got away with stuff and the thing about Silverstream and Millie. And it IS a miracle!