Reviews for Not My Tale
queen of wolfs chapter 2 . 7/19
i forgot about this story...
wonder how goat mom is gonna react to her child being alive again
Guest chapter 2 . 11/23/2019
No offence, but I hate stories like this. Bringing in an op godlike being can undermine the actual characters and ruin what made the original story good. So sorry, this isnt for me.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2019
Please continue I'm already just reading these little bits. That I want, no I sincerely hope you'll continue the story!
Deiner chapter 1 . 11/16/2019
Buena historia, espero que sigas así
Chara chapter 2 . 9/24/2019
You know you can delete anonymous reviews, right?
Savaton chapter 2 . 9/12/2019
Please continue with this godly-choco-goodness! I think that I'm addicted!
suvblenin chapter 1 . 9/4/2019
This is great work so far. I really like the descriptions you used, they really set the mood you were trying to convey.
I was actually wondering if you wanted to join a discord that a friend of mine owns. It's for writers to share their work, get feedback, and offer tips and stuff. You can actually promote work too, if you're good enough. I think they'd be happy to have you. Here's the invite, if you want to check it out.
/WqWV9Ns
prisoner 5580 chapter 2 . 9/4/2019
i am happy to see that you decided to continue wrighting this story and i look forward to the next chapter i realy like your idea so far and cant wait for the next chapter
TheBlackSwort chapter 2 . 9/1/2019
I love the chapter I gonna wait for the next
You're aure the best
Verdauga chapter 1 . 8/31/2019
I likey
Underfan chapter 2 . 8/30/2019
Here you go~! One hundredth review! So glad to see the good time trio reunited! Now onto mama toriel!
Katapaige chapter 2 . 8/30/2019
I'll admit. I didn't think an undertale and Naruto xover existed but here we are! you've made two of them, and lemme tell you, I've been a fan of your works for a while and these two stories haven't disappointed me yet and I really love the way you portray each character. the previews at the end have me excited for what's to come and I'll gladly read anything you publish!

Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/29/2019
YES !

CHARA IS MY WAIFU AND I LOVE YOU FOR BRING HER !
akeiser45 chapter 2 . 8/29/2019
YAY! The story is still going!

Man you really man the Previews really interesting! Keep it up!
NeonZangetsu chapter 2 . 8/29/2019
Buzz off trolls, I'm not quitting.
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