| Reviews for Master Arc |
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2notgood chapter 4 . 2h Really love this story looking forward to more! |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10 can you do cinder next with belt |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/22 Your story is amazing and I would love to see an update if you have the time. |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/4 thanks for updating this story is awesome |
Mart-kos99k chapter 2 . 6/4 Didn't realize how much I would like a Hanaukyou maid team-style RWBY story until now. Please keep up the good work but also make sure you check for grammar mistakes, I saw a bunch of those in the first chapter. |
hellfire45 chapter 4 . 6/3 Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next |
Tommy298 chapter 4 . 5/31 um thanks for updating. uh I'll be honest I'm not big into s&m stuff and I didn't expect this fic to be like that but I like the setting too much to drop this so yeah looking forward to the next update |
Axccel chapter 4 . 5/30 Catgrills for life! |
typo chapter 4 . 5/30 mangled sentence: She knew he said she was going to spank her yet |
typo chapter 4 . 5/30 Weiss, not Wiess |
Axccel chapter 3 . 5/29 Making gud gurls. |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/29 can you do raven Glynda Cinder next pleas |
Veraq chapter 4 . 5/29 So is this a two parter or will the next chapter be about Weiss? I'd be disappointed to have Blake caned off screen. I'm not sure if shorter chapters are a great idea since I like both the maids interactions among each other as well as the buildup and the actual spankings. Leaving out anything of that would make it worse. As for this chapter, I love how you handled Blake, I hope we'll get to see her experience the cane next chapter, hopefully soon. Great job! Above all, I'm glad to have a new chapter. Thanks for taking the time to write and upload. |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/29 Well the best ship is done, might as well come back to this when it's Blake's turn again. |
246vili chapter 4 . 5/29 Another girl got her time with the master. Lucky for them, unlucky for their butts. Keep up the good work and stay healthy. |